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Star Wars Revisited

Saw the latest Star Wars, only gave it two cheers If the Star Wars gods hear this, they'll laser my rear Got protection out my way Pals with lasers make you pay A force of galactic power you should certainly fear

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Judith S

Date: 12/28/2017 12:42:00 PM

Another cheery write!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/28/2017 8:06:00 PM

I'm full of.... uh cheery writes!!! lol Love to you this freezing Thursday evening dear Miss Judith!!! Your Canadian puppy eyed friend! xxx

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2017 8:09:00 AM

There was a man who went to watch star wars, Bought a long hot dog from one of the stalls. Guzzled it down like a pig, His belly grew so big. Got stuck in between the doors!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/28/2017 9:16:00 AM

That was the best part of the whole deal!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2017 7:58:00 AM

I hear it s not very good... Too many of them now..

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/28/2017 9:14:00 AM

Long past time to put them to bed!!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/28/2017 7:57:00 AM

Sequels and prequels when will it end?//If up to me I'd blend//movie makers//with ticket takers//and the results to Mars I'd send. BEAM ME UP SCOTTIE'S DADDY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/28/2017 9:13:00 AM

A disappointment but I was railroaded into attending... a waste of my valuable time I'd say!!! Don't bother if you were thinking of it! If it wasn't so loud, I'd probably have slept!!!