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STAR GAZING

Time to take my patch off, I’ve been somewhat wobbly
Everything beautiful, everything bright,
So much clearer in black and white,
No double vision this time, I promise you honestly,
During my op visited our galaxy, am addicted to astrology

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CayCay Godwin

March 19, 2025 at 11:37 AM

Oh, sweetie so glad a physical challenge has not only been healed but also replaced with the best possible vision. So, can you see how cute you are in your avatar? I am and have been since 12, a big believer in astrology, but one must study it beyond the common horoscope crap that decides many people's opinion about it. I actually know my karma because of how deeply I've gone with my studies. The galaxy belongs to God. The Wisemen were astrologers. I'm going on and will stop now - CayCay

Karen Jones

March 18, 2025 at 11:44 AM

Hugs I too was clueless as to your surgery and vision challenges. Glad you are better! Nice write!

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2025 at 2:31 PM

Oh cool. I see you are much better now. Amazing.

Valsa George

March 6, 2025 at 11:20 PM

Dear friend, I didn't know that you had an eye surgery. Now with better vision, I am sure you are able to see and enjoy better the stars and all that is beautiful around. Hope you have fully got back your eye sight. Star gazing is indeed fun. Glad to know that after an interim period of uneasiness, you are back to normal health. Now you enjoy , dear one.

Michael Tor

March 4, 2025 at 11:44 AM

Glad your feeling better did not know you had surgery. So glad you can see the stars maybe you will see a shooting star. God bless you and heal you Jennifer, hugs...

Sally Eslinger

March 4, 2025 at 3:00 AM

Jennifer! Wow! What a new take on the limerick for me — away from. the personal into focus on space and back to the I agan. The longer lines, too, with their music — Reads very sophisticatedExhibits your knowledge and talent shining here. A Fave for me. xox sally

Duke Beaufort

March 3, 2025 at 6:50 PM

Jennifer, a great way to look at being under. I hope the visit to the stars was beautiful and inspiring. Glad you are well. Smiles!!

Beryl Edmonds

March 3, 2025 at 12:46 AM

So pleased all has gone well for you Jennifer. I have double vision and have a prism in my spectacles to correct it…. Beryl

Brandy Nicole

March 1, 2025 at 7:09 PM

Dear Jennifer, it sounds like you've been through a lot lately. I'm so thankful you're doing well, my sweet friend. Yes, everything is beautiful and bright. Just as it should be. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy