Star Gazing

Some say stars are sky glitter -- every girl likes a little extra sparkle, and every boy needs direction of loftier eyes every soul seeking greater constellation nearer horizons I keep my sighs....

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/8/2025 12:15:00 AM

What a celestially beautiful piece you've woven here dear Joe! So artistically you've conveyed the metaphorical meaning of those cosmic glitters in the night sky, which may depict a different essence for every soul. Such a gorgeous tapestry you've created with your serene words and that ending, ah, touches the heart! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light and many best wishes.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2025 5:22:00 AM

Very kind of you, Hiya; thank you. So pleased this one touched you favorably. Yes, may divine light fill us and enfold us, go before us lighting the way. Blessings my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 2/8/2025 12:03:00 AM

Yes, all of us long for some glitter in life. It may not be the same for everyone. What a girl looks for may not be the thing sought by a boy. Each soul seeks constellations of glitter. A lovely poem dear Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2025 5:27:00 AM

Yes, we are different, yet the same in Christ. As always you leave such heartfelt, practical tutoring comments. For everyone to take something positive away with them for the day ahead. Thank you.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/7/2025 11:49:00 PM

Sighs it is. lovely write dear poet.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2025 5:38:00 AM

Sighs are the articulation of the soul we strive to put into practical perspective -- I often just settle for gazing at stars and wondrous horizons. Understanding the deeper mysterious of the soul is an eternity of headaches I often need long rests from:) Thank you, Thriveni, have a beautiful day my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/7/2025 8:45:00 PM

Truly, the night sky is amazing. It is getting harder to see with the artificial lighting on earth, but certain places still show the Milky Way clearly. This is a beautiful poem.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2025 5:41:00 AM

Yes, I know; away from the city, especially in the mountains we get a grander show of the Universe Spectacular! Makes me feel so tiny...while large for sensing connection.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2025 11:12:00 AM

What a lovely write you have here. Yes, stars do glitter in the big sky. "Good Luck" if for a contest.... Have a fun day as you write away..................

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2025 5:44:00 AM

Hi Paula; I never get tired of watching them. Just to imagine all the worlds similar to ours, and perhaps unimaginably different...a meditation for sure. Thank you for commenting my friend. Have beautiful day!