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Star Flower

In the twilight of suspended star thunder where the waking jungle and broken Temple of tradition meet one another she moves with a panthera prana, pranayama of precise paradise, air of spaceless pleasure, A lavender Tigress of effortless enlightenment seeking sensations on the edge of eternity's cremation, on her fingertips questions and answers dance to mudras of nimble demolition as the triumph of truth blazes on the tip of her tongue's flavored amusement, genetics of ginger helix she licks and sticks to the flesh of nude nirvana limber in the moment of typeless titillation, becoming an animal of fearless asana, a creature of chaos prowling along the heartbeat of karma, Brahma made her beauty from the diamonds of a billion deceased roses, the ascetics recognize her as a child of Kali, gorgeous and gruesome in vendetta, for the Brahmins she is a Mother of immeasurable mystery, a kiss on the eye of history, worshipers whisper the wealth of her shameless and shapeless clarity, as charity of Parvati, Heirlooms of sun blood and moon love decorate the tender truth of her body, a garden of webbing galaxies, catching the notions of novas her mandala, rain romantic in flying fall, plucking the Ganges sitar her mantra, the movement of melange madness through perfect passion her sutra, poetry naked on the nerves of nascent love need is her tantra, chakras uniting to recreate the uncreated color of consciousness, crown her aura, as the lotus of love blooms blue, she dances on the fragrance of freedom - J.A.B.

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Date: 7/11/2015 10:27:00 AM
You have created a Beauty with the colors of India. I will come back soon to make my proper comment on this wonderful write dear friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K kapoor
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/12/2015 8:36:00 PM
The origins of great India are from somewhere else Ravindra...She is a culture of unsurpassed wisdom, splendor and desolation...soon a great crisis will test the spirit of India...your view of this composition is motivational Ravindra, thank you...J.A.B.
Date: 3/11/2015 2:15:00 PM
Just Wow Justin, I am in awe after reading this piece... 'waking jungle and broken Temple of tradition'... an angelic beauty blessed by the Hindu Gods and Godesses who looks forward to enlightenment... of both the orient and the occident... more than anything I am astonished by the depth of knowledge you posess on Indian history and beliefs... a fav 7... regards, nadiya
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Date: 3/11/2015 8:46:00 PM
She was born with perfect Enlightenment, and now she has become it, she has her passion, her expression, and she has the sun at her feet Nadiya. The spirit of Central Asia is very much alive in my blood and soul, however, my study of it's traditions is just begining. Its funny, that which created those traditions exist in me, yet I know not the technicalities and training. You bring me joy Nadiya...J.A.B.
Date: 3/10/2015 8:15:00 AM
Simply sleek sexy and sumptuous. You outdid yourself with this piece my friend.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/10/2015 8:35:00 PM
Yes Richard, as our truth strengthens, so does the quality of our passion...there is something very sexy about originality...J.A.B.
Date: 3/9/2015 9:31:00 PM
"a garden of webbing galaxies...rain romantic in flying fall...a creature of chaos prowling along the heartbeat of karma..." she is surely a fascinating vision of inspiration. "she dances on the fragrance of freedom" Your poetry plays with the senses and switches our perspectives with serendipitous grace..shaping our minds to your mind. Very magical one...your work is always ideal. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/10/2015 8:19:00 PM
Continued...My Lanvander Tigress is the most beautiful manifestation of this creative power...the path to this form of beauty is very dangerous, and the sacrafices required may ruin the weak, strangely enough, souls which deveolp this power do not choose to, this gift is the result of their truth become body and mind. Your comment is brilliant, and motivating, thank you for being so vivacious LauraJ.A.B.
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Date: 3/10/2015 8:08:00 PM
My work is ideal when I exist in the magic of rare beauty Laura...exactly right great Poetess, this poem is briming with the synthesis of "opposites" which creates a higher truth and function of mind. Forces combined to create antithesis of consciousness that makes the building of new reality limitless, yet true too! We must realize that definitions can be limits, and that frredom is born in creativity...J.A.B.
Date: 3/7/2015 11:11:00 PM
You speak a language I don't understand. The only Sutra I knew is Kama Sutra. ;) India is a great country which has given much to the world, Justin. I have good Indian friends, and I love Indian dance. Watch Bride and Prejudice, if you can. Ashwara Rai shines as the Indian version of Elizabeth Bennet. Though I don't understand most of this, I understand your love for your source of inspiration- the all consuming SHE. It's a powerful passionate write. You do nothing half way.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/8/2015 1:57:00 AM
I speak the language of life in full bloom...of a universe primordial, primal, and poetic, where the Present is every power and possibility alive in this woman's breath of existence. Kama Sutra, the magic of touch tuning consciousness into a source of elemental creation. Yes, SHE, Supernatural Heart Energy...life is meant to be epic Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 3/4/2015 5:30:00 AM
Oh I love both your aliteration and your thoughts.Your mind is a bible of vocabulary,and your soul ..Yes we can feel that as we read along.So much beauty and the depth of what is going on in that heart is yet to be found.Fantastic!Charma
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:27:00 PM
A heart must always have treasure yet to be found, otherwise it has ceased creating, and lost it's love for life...there is an inherent rhythm to all thought and emotion, ergo, consciousness is an instrument of limitless potential Charma. To be a living bible of love is a purpose that you and I share my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

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