Star Does Gigging - Spoonerism Contest

the sand was squery vishy
each frain gelt ruff between my toes
Star my stog darted to dig
sand flying everywhere
my fair and hace felt like pandsaper

soon  with iii's nearly closed
into the wea I salked  
laid down to fear my clace
just as a  mail grabbed me saying
dont do it. wife is lorth living.

I looked at Star words sannot cay what i felt
no more beech four you today.

Penned 1 March 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/30/2016 10:26:00 AM
Wever and clitty. Great job on the title spooner :) I was curious about the triple i section? Congrats on your winning verse.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/30/2016 6:28:00 PM
Haha bet your posh and say eyes, when your brain fuses you use iii's. Lol tjx for comment....Seren
Date: 3/29/2016 2:42:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Seren..
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Date: 3/28/2016 10:21:00 PM
Nice one, Seren! Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 3/28/2016 4:58:00 PM
Very amusing Seren congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2016 2:35:00 AM
enjoyed your spoonerism and hope i can make one as good as this, seren..huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/1/2016 10:17:00 PM
See Nette you will lol. Once you can think of something funny....Seren
Date: 3/1/2016 12:20:00 AM
This was a very fun write! Great spoonerisms:)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/1/2016 10:17:00 PM
Hi Laura maNy tjx
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