Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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Star

Oh! Luminous Star
Visible light so far up above
Music plays in your silent tranquil night
As we wish upon a star

Firefly’s beacon in velvet twilight
Hypnotic faceted beguiling shooting stars
Shining galaxies since beginning of time
Guiding ships through darken briny seas

Oh! Luminous Star
Visible light so far up above
Music plays in your silent tranquil night
As we wish upon a star

Ancient stars moving slowly 
Through time awakening the fire of romantic souls
With feelings of ecstasy
Love that is planted wanting for more

Oh! Luminous Star
Visible light so far up above
Music plays in your silent tranquil night
As we wish upon a star

A kiss of your breath intimate heartbeat rhythm of our dreams
Your glamour which turns life into a golden haze
Scattered stars align in our sky
The existence of space and time

Oh! Luminous Star
Visible light so far up above
Music plays in your silent tranquil night
As we wish upon a star

Truth in your art will together thrive
In your light, I learn how to love
In your beauty to write a poetic verse
In your energy to slumber in your lullaby 

Oh! Luminous Star
Visible light so far up above
Music plays in your silent tranquil night
I'll always wish upon you, my  Luminous Star

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Susan Gentry December 23, 2015 at 2:25 AM Congrats on your win in contest!

Viv Wigley December 22, 2015 at 8:55 PM Beautiful, Eve,well done. Viv x

Poet Destroyer A December 22, 2015 at 3:53 PM Eve, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA

Paul Callus December 22, 2015 at 12:44 PM This is beautiful, Eve!! Lovely content, and the repetitive lines have served you well. ~ Congratulations on this worthy podium finish! ~ Regards & hugs // paul

Robert Lindley December 22, 2015 at 10:12 AM I simply love star poems and this one is a great beauty my friend! Congrats on your win!

Joseph May December 22, 2015 at 8:42 AM Congrats on your win Eve

Michael Tor December 22, 2015 at 7:10 AM Beautiful Eve love the imagery you shared.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 1:28 AM Lovely write n win Eve.. big congrats!

Skat A December 21, 2015 at 11:42 PM Eve, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT

Vera Duggan December 20, 2015 at 10:41 PM Oh Eve this is so beautiful, I will wish upon a star and wish you and your family a Merry Christmas,, Take care...........Vera....SM Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 10:53 PM Thank you dear friend I hope you Peter are doing great. hugs Eve

Bl Devnath December 20, 2015 at 11:20 AM Exquisite portrait of love having excellent rhythm hidden in heart. Clear 7 i feel. My favorite. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:26 AM B.L., thank you so much for your constant support, this kind of compliment encourages me to improve. Hugs dear friend

CayCay Godwin December 20, 2015 at 11:14 AM I saw no indication that you entered this write in the 'star' contest. I sure reads like a winner to me. Truly enjoyable and pretty ... CayCay Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:24 AM CayCay,I did. I didn't know it was for old poems, but my husband said it is old 2 hours old so I went ahead and posted. I hope she doesn't mind. But I did write it for her.

Lin Lane December 20, 2015 at 4:19 AM g'morning sweet one. Waking to your words made me want to look at the stars. Second verse is my favorite...smooch pooch Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:31 AM It reminded me, excuse me for being personal, but the parking and getting very romantic at night or the old move theaters with the speakers out side the car.

Arthur Vaso December 20, 2015 at 2:07 AM So beautiful Eve, does your hubby know how lucky he is to have you? Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:33 AM My husband said yes because I tell him all the time. I have always waited on him hand and foot. I am of the old school and I love doing it. Hugs dear friend

Eric Boddie December 19, 2015 at 9:24 PM I wish upon the eve that happiness was conceived by what we should Believe in an effort to retrieve the thing money can not achieve which can't even be stolen by thieves so I Thank Him For The talents you have received....;) Eve Roper December 19, 2015 at 10:51 PM Amen! I always sign my canvas Eve Roper IJNA , In Jesus Name Amen. Thank you Mr. Boddie

Jan Allison December 19, 2015 at 8:18 PM Wow Eve this has absolutely blown me way with the imagery - love the impact of the repeated lines - you are a beacon of light on a dark day on soup:-) hugs Jan xx7 and fave xx Eve Roper December 19, 2015 at 9:16 PM Awe! Your so precious, thank you. Hugs dear friend