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star-stitched silence

in her star-stitched s i l e n c e she breathes ~ glass-winged h o p e weaving angelic hymns with lilac light like a ballerina draped in chiffon ~ pirouetting through poetry amidst dusk kissed by gloaming gold, s w i r l i n g origami spring into a sky full of paper planes fleeting with sakura secrets serving the sinister and serene with citrine smoke of seraphic dust… so let l o v e rise as the maternal Goddess of nocturnal hours she seeks not the cursed and crestfallen ~ familiar faces masked with jilted jasmines and eagle feathers lurking in psychedelic shores awaiting the downfall ~ like crashing comets phasing upon the lamented lighthouse flickering fickle flares of pained perspectives... for the ones that sleep in tree-high-retreats counting frozen sparks can never seize as she is the sunflower sigh that dreams between shifting colors of azure leaves a metaphor molded from the silver of the moon’s ink forgotten by thistles and thorns of t i m e ….

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Date: 4/20/2025 9:52:00 PM
This is lovely Ink...Ink. :) <3
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Date: 4/20/2025 5:17:00 AM
"like a ballerina draped in chiffon ~ pirouetting through poetry". Dear Empress, you are indeed a ballerina, pirouetting through poetry. Life is one of thorns. yet love is a magic potion that can set right relations gone awry. Ignore masked faces 'with jilted jasmines and eagle feathers lurking in psychedelic shores'. Also forget the thistles and thorns of life and carve your own fate. Your alliterations are simply superb. Another masterpiece.
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Date: 4/19/2025 1:16:00 PM
Dearest Inky, once again your poetic gift of imagery jumps off the page to embrace me in a caress of beauty. Your alliteration makes your words flow in a lyrical waterfall. Love the beautiful metaphor for love. Dear friend your writing gifts all who are privileged to read it crossing borders and time! Sending you Easter blessings of joy!
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Date: 4/18/2025 12:33:00 PM
I can never tire of assessing your poetry as brilliant. The alliteration, imagery and metaphors combine to make your poems excellent. You truly live in psychedelic shores.
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:41:00 AM
weaving angelic hymns with lilac light like a ballerina draped in chiffon … ooo child .. that imagery!!!! pirouetting through poetry amidst dusk kissed by gloaming gold, oooo the glow in that line!!! sakura secrets serving the sinister and serene with citrine smoke of seraphic dust… ooooo yess love me some alliterations!!!! lamented lighthouse flickering fickle flares of pained perspectives... mmm paints a glorious portrait of a scenery.. metaphor molded from the silver of the moon’s ink forgotten by thistles and thorns of time.. mmm the elements flow so delicately in this piece!!! Absolutely divine weave.
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Date: 4/18/2025 8:34:00 AM
"She seeks not the cursed and crestfallen ..." Can't blame you there. "Let love rise..." Always a good way to start off the day. So many reasons to be thankful. Still, there will be thorns .
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Date: 4/18/2025 5:54:00 AM
Thorns of time ! Time is a metaphor I use for something very special to me . Love this poem .
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