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Standby

Standby Your name is called To fly Compelled To keep you, I Am held By woe And now I can't Let go. 4/01/21 Finding Your Musette 2 Sponsor: Joseph May Picture #1

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:53:00 PM

I read this like a rap in my mind, what a nice and sweet flowing poem.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/26/2021 12:55:00 PM

Michelle, congrats on your 1st place win with your well written musette! Blessings, Kim M

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2021 11:52:00 AM

Hi Michelle, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 4:03:00 PM

I like the romance you put into this one Michelle. Congratulations on your wonderful first placement. Blessings xxoo.

Joseph May

Date: 4/24/2021 10:50:00 AM

Very nicely depicted Michelle.. Congrats on your win

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2021 3:05:00 PM

Great string of verses, Michelle, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/5/2021 10:37:00 AM

Hi Michelle, best wishes for Joseph's contest - certain this will place high. Might have a go at it also. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/3/2021 12:07:00 PM

Sounds like mothers everywhere sending their son off to war . . . .Aloha! Rico

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 1:09:00 PM

so interesting. I will have to see the picture this was written for.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/2/2021 2:38:00 PM

I am glad you like it, thank you, Andrea~

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2021 12:32:00 PM

Hi Michelle, What a good entry for the contest theme. Your words worked well with the photo. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and a Happy Easter. PS, I chose the same photo:-)Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/2/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Alexis (and your poem is very good too!)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2021 7:39:00 PM

This gets a 'two-thumbs-up' rating from me, Michelle. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/2/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thanks for the stamp of approval!