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Stand under the bon-bon colored umbrella and watch the lizard rise from the ashes

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Based off my friend group, each stanza represents a person.

A girl who's incredibly shy, But if she opens up, she's like a bon-bon, So colorful and exciting, Her friends help her fly, Another young lass, Who will let you stand under her umbrella, When your feeling down or lost, But watch out for her sass, Again another lady, yes, Who needs encouraging and support, Her friends stand behind her and say; You will never be less, And here is the last girl, Risen from ashes and pain, Her friends watch with pride, As her new, confident wings unfurl.

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