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This is purely a fictional write for a contest - it is very emotional

01~14~15
Contest: Stand By Me
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler

Submitted to my favourite old poem contest - Shadow Hamilton
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First place in Stand By Me Contest Judged 01/24/15
Submitted To Laura Loo's First place only II contest


~awarded 1st place~

 

Oh my darling the news is so bleak I saw the consultant only last week Perhaps we better start making plans See the vicar; hear the wedding banns All I’ve ever wanted was to be your wife For better for worse, through trouble and strife The consultant confirmed I’ll not last the year Oh kiss me my darling; just hold me so near Wedding plans float around in my head My dying wish is that we should wed Time's running out so we mustn’t linger I need your wedding ring on my finger A simple service, just as quiet as can be All I ask my darling is that you stand by me 01~14~ 2015

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Date: 9/4/2016 6:12:00 PM
Back with my congrats Jan :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/6/2017 4:11:00 PM
Thanks LuLoo sorry I missed replying until now:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/20/2016 8:04:00 PM
A beautiful, bittersweet poem with endearing emotions expressed exquisitely. Congrats on your contest win, Special Congratulations on your Silver Anniversary celebration! blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Lynn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2016 5:25:00 PM
Congrats Jan on your placement
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Date: 8/19/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2016 10:59:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/19/2016 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your placing with this wonderful write. Sunita
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/18/2016 7:30:00 PM
Hello, Jan, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/19/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thanks as ever for a great contest and win:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2016 10:10:00 PM
I remember this beauty Jan. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ; ) 7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/20/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Connie its quite a tear jerker and sadly i am hearing more and more stories of this nature:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2016 8:58:00 PM
Jan, back to congratulate you again for another win and your fine placement for this lovely poem in Laura's Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/20/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2016 5:56:00 PM
Jan, I remember when I first read this lovely lady, love it...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/20/2016 1:18:00 AM
Thanks LuLoo it is a sad poem but special to me for many reasons:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2015 3:44:00 PM
Congrats, Jan. Maybe this one I've seen three times now?? (I have some poems I have used over and over again in contests, but it's because they accept old poems!!) You can't go wrong with an oldie but goodie like this one.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Andrea - I look at some of my poems and I can't believe I wrote them - but I did lol - this one is very sad but people do seem to like it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 3:05:00 PM
A wonderfully sad , winning sonnet my friend!! Congrats on your win!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2015 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Robert this is quite an emotional poem I am so pleased you liked it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 9:16:00 AM
Heartfelt and well written. Jan
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Date: 12/24/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 2:22:00 AM
JAN, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:27:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 1:35:00 AM
A sad but beautiful sonnet, Jan. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. T.J
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:27:00 AM
Thanks so much TJ:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 7:08:00 PM
aww...aww....aww....
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/23/2015 7:12:00 PM
aww thanks Cas it is such an emotional poem - I look at some of my work and can't believe it flowed from my pen - do you do that too? hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 5:45:00 PM
I do remember this poem, Jan. A sad but lovely Sonnet. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/23/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Sandra it makes me feel quite emotional reading this poem as sadly this scenario does happen:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 3:06:00 PM
Not totally fictional in which we can take our thoughts and feelings, and rearrange the personage...nicely written meaningful poem, congrats :)
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:30:00 PM
Oh I didn't know the contest had been judged thanks so much Ed :-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 8/2/2015 2:56:00 PM
Jan, such a beautifully written winning work.. Much applause!
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Date: 8/2/2015 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Dave it is an emotional write - sadly these things are happening all to often these days:-( hugs jan
Date: 7/29/2015 1:51:00 AM
Goosebumps! You were able to capture the emotion in so sad situation, Jan. Congrats! hugs!
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Date: 7/29/2015 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 10:02:00 AM
Awesome poem!! Big congrats on your fine win my friend!A7
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Robert:-) It is a very emotional poem - sadly I see this scenario happening more and more:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2015 12:53:00 AM
Ah Jan its so heartfelt, Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel !
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 11:26:00 PM
Jan, l'm glad that this heartfelt write made the winners list. Congratulations on your win. :-)Alexis
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:53:00 AM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 8:42:00 PM
JAN. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/27/2015 1:52:00 AM
Thanks for another great contest Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2015 6:31:00 PM
congrats on your win,Jan, a beautiful poem :)
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Date: 7/26/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thanks Mohamed:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 6/11/2015 10:48:00 PM
Jan.. A heartfelt winner, loved it!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/12/2015 12:16:00 AM
Thanks Dave:-) HUgs Jan xx
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