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Stalling At the Crosswalk

` stuck between smoke stack volumes in alphabetical order woven metal bodies straight lines leaving little to the imagination some big, some small from exhausted paint rollers leaving their mark just outside of the jewelry store crushed cigarette butts on the ground falling between the cracks of walkways reflecting diamond brooches you can’t afford designer dreams offered at half the price where the sign in the windows reads “anything you want” and you do scents drift between stone columns fast food lines move slower as fries fall to the bottom to be found later when the traffic light finally turns green and you run out of gas stalling at the crosswalk of where you never wanted to be 11/1/19 For the: Anything you want Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 11/12/2019 2:03:00 PM
I sifted thru your poems to find one unromantic, and here’s where I stalled — where I want to be. I assume you described your actual experience in terrific detail, cause I can’t imagine imagination this creative
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Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 2:09:00 PM
Wow, you actually found one that wasn't a love poem...how did that happen? :) Thanks Hannah, it is somewhere between reality and imagination. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 11/6/2019 9:44:00 AM
I love the color and the emotion. I felt it. I saw the cigarette butts in the crack and felt the empty glance at the jewelry I could not afford....... all while being somewhere I did not want to be.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank so much Darrell. I appreciate you stopping by today.
Date: 11/2/2019 12:44:00 PM
Another amazing write, your free verse is outstanding, you can write anything you want, I guess that means this is a winner!
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/4/2019 12:18:00 PM
Sorry, each judge has their own criteria, this is a winner to me. Hey Chris check out my new post if you can, give me your feedback on the song please!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 10:16:00 AM
Thanks John but this time that wasn't the case. I guess this didn't touch the judge as I had hoped.
Date: 11/2/2019 8:44:00 AM
Oh, cool write Chris! Striking evocative imagery. Just excellent. My best to you in the contest, xomo!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen.
Date: 11/1/2019 11:52:00 PM
Very good poetry... such a vivid impression. Blessings to you, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina.
Date: 11/1/2019 9:15:00 PM
Fantastic imagery!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 11/1/2019 5:19:00 PM
It was as if I was standing alongside of you...great imagery!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 11/1/2019 5:00:00 PM
You describe the scene so vividly you take the reader there and the metaphor is amazing in this one ...love designer dreams offered at half price....well crafted exquisite write my friend ... best wishes in the contest :). Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. The contest said anything you want so I thought I post something kind of abstract in thought. I am happy you liked it. .
Date: 11/1/2019 4:52:00 PM
Wow your ability to describe everything in this poem is amazing Chris. Well written! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I appreciate your kind words.

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