Daniel Turner Poet Sonnet

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Stained Glass Dream

It saddens me to gaze upon the stars
I see them blinking, fighting back their tears
Reminding me our distance is so far
Their numbers are the days without you near

Assembling pieces of my scattered thoughts
An image comes to me in stained glass scenes
Subconsciously I gather shards embossed
Create a picture of you here with me

Then suddenly a sign from fate appears
A shooting star takes flight across the sky
I close my eyes and wish that you were here
To stay with me and never say goodbye

I think about the happiness love brings
Then go inside to dream my stained glass dream



   an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Elissa Quigley September 16, 2016 at 10:49 AM I love the title, and the poem goes perfectly with it. Daniel Turner September 16, 2016 at 1:14 PM Thank you, Elissa. I really appreciate you taking the time to read! Your comments of support are heartwarming. Thank you for leaving your smile:)

Sharon Gulley September 7, 2016 at 9:34 AM A perfect picture of thought. I enjoyed your stained glass dreams. : ) Daniel Turner September 8, 2016 at 11:04 AM Thank you, Sharon. You're so kind. I really appreciate your kind words of support. Always nice to see a pretty face, too":)

Lynn Marie August 10, 2016 at 2:17 PM This is such a pretty piece. The "stained glass" really elevates the emotional depth of your words.. I especially love the delicate way "hope" emerges...lovely imagery, skillfully penned. blessings, lynn Daniel Turner August 11, 2016 at 7:02 AM Thank you Lynn. I was rather fond of this one myself. I love stained glass. I am flattered that you have taken an interest in my poems. I appreciate your time and the support.

Connie Marcum Wong July 28, 2016 at 10:35 AM Daniel, your title caught my eye on this poem. I adore stained glass.It is possible to soak in some of the color helping to balance the body which is why I believe they are in so many churches. I love the way you used stained glass in this poem to express your scattered thoughts. This poem shines with its colorful beauty! 7 ; ) Daniel Turner July 28, 2016 at 10:40 AM Thank you Connie. As you know I thrive on being "different" lol I appreciate your kindness and I too love stained glass. It just seems to add a little class! Like you!

Jean Murray July 26, 2016 at 5:46 PM A shooting star like the feather that falls. I too believe Daniel. This poem is a beauty. Jean Murray July 26, 2016 at 6:03 PM Shite!! We had a lovely month of May but since then more rain than shine Daniel. I would prefer this to 100 degrees anyday however. God help you. Daniel Turner July 26, 2016 at 5:52 PM Thank you Jean. I guess so many poem were posted it didn't get read very much. I am glad you enjoyed as I thought it was a pretty good one. I appreciate your friendly support. How's the weather in Ireland this time of year? It's been over 100 here for almost a month. Take care little lass.

Tim Smith July 24, 2016 at 2:16 PM One of you best sonnets to date DT...I love a stained glass dream...a fave Daniel Turner July 24, 2016 at 2:30 PM Thanks Tim. I am so happy you liked it. Your continued support is a driving force for me to keep writing. I really appreciate your constant encouragement.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2016 at 2:06 PM - Wishes and dreams in your beautiful night sky, filled with stars - A beautiful poem to read - We all have the same sky ...... send your thoughts with the stars, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Daniel Turner July 24, 2016 at 2:14 PM Thank you Anne Lise. I'll bet you have some beautiful night skies in Norway. Cold and clear, to share with someone, making wishes. Thank you for the friendly visit and the welcomed comments.

John Hamilton July 24, 2016 at 1:39 PM "Stained glass dream", such a nice ring to it, "stars blinking, fighting back the tears" just golden words Daniel, a beautiful write very sentimental, but still slightly hopeful.A7 Daniel Turner July 24, 2016 at 1:47 PM Thank you John. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such wonderful comments. I am happy that you enjoyed it. I also appreciate the 7!