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Stained Sofa Leaning right Cover over Hides the filthy years of wear and living. For Brian's contest-thanks for the challenge!

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/24/2009 5:20:00 AM

Wow, Doris, that says a lot!!! Excellent writing. Congratulations, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2009 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the Hot Poems list. Mom

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/11/2009 10:07:00 AM

I unfortunately have a distinct past vision of this very couch. I think alot of people might have that old piece of furniture that has oh so visibly experienced life. Congratulations on getting a placement in this contest.

Adell Foster

Date: 10/10/2009 9:54:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your win in Brians contest, much continues success in writing, God Bless, Always, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Doris. May you have many more. Love,Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2009 7:27:00 AM

I love this witty poem! Congratulations! Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/9/2009 4:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Doris, with this wonderful inspiration! Love, Robin

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2009 3:08:00 AM

Congratulations in your win in the contest. Great work. Mom

Elaine George

Date: 10/9/2009 2:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest, Doris. Love, Lainie

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 2:46:00 AM

Doris, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 10/9/2009 12:57:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Doris.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.

James Peranteau

Date: 10/6/2009 8:14:00 AM

I just read some ones poem yesterday about a dinning room table that had its full use,.....this works well with it ! Great poem Doris,....wondering if I'll read another run down furniture poem this week !,..comes in threes,..doesn't it ? *smiles* james

John Freeman

Date: 10/4/2009 11:09:00 AM

Brilliant write in thisTetractys, Doris. I had never thought of a sofa in this way. Good job, much talent is shown in this write. Thanks for all your comments on my writes. Sincerely Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/3/2009 2:32:00 PM

Never thought of a Sofa in this way, nice write Doris >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/3/2009 11:11:00 AM

Sometimes the stained, bent sofa can recall such memories. Like you, I "cover over" furniture like this, but in doing so, perhaps we are covering the memories as well. Very intriguing write, Doris! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2009 6:34:00 AM

Doris I wish you the best in Brian's contest. I know exactly what you are talking about here. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 10/3/2009 12:25:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Doris.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 10/2/2009 7:17:00 PM

Good one, Doris. Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2009 4:00:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Mom