Notes About The Poem

DEESWHEAT( TANKA/CINQUAIN TRIPLET )

with an integral CAPITALISED title headings(making a separate internal triplet poem)for each  section of the unified cinquain has single word for each tanka style show(3) & tell(2) giving an overall 18 line (deeswheat)   enigmatic experimental verse.

STAGED REBIRTH-:-

STAGED REBIRTH-:-
pure
 sourced
declared

decorated
frescos
now SHOWING A POINT
imaged
 appropriate 
moods

deeply
impressed
still REMAIN A PRESCENCE 
depicted
  lyrical
lined

coloured
dimension
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Delightful! We peak into each line admiring the view! Congrats on POTD! Love the decorated fresco and colored dimension!
Delegans Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 7:50 PM
Congrats on your POTD honor, Brian.
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 6:24 PM
' lyrical lined coloured dimension. ' Interesting and creative, indeed. Congratulations Brian, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative "STAGED REBIRTH" write. Have a blessed day/week with your win...............
Bartley Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations Brian. Always a pleasure reading your poetry.
George Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 9:08 AM
Your style is quite different and unique. Congratulations Brian on your well deserved POTD honor.
Anaya Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 8:35 AM
TANKA/CINQUAIN TRIPLET is this a new form you've created? Looks intelligent. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Brian! Wishing you, Ootles of Footles & Ekphrasis to brighten your days~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 5:04 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation.
La France Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:54 AM
Brian ,interesting creation and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~
Gifford Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:47 AM
Hello Brian, Congratulations on your lovely poem being featured as POTD. Have a wonderful day.
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:42 AM
Brian, nicely done. Congratulations on POTD.
Empress Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Love this! As always made me think deep dear brian! A well deserved POTD! It makes me happy seeing you on the spotlight! Pleasure reading. Sending you light always! Congratulations
Edmonds  Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations Brian on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
G  Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 12:34 AM
I'd like to see you beat your two day streak this time Brian :) congratulations on POTD
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations on your unique potd!
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