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Stacking Sandbags

i stacked sandbags against the river of your fervent woe hoping you would stay safe and dry- but when the tide crashed, you crashed, and i am having a hard time letting go; for you are the one who i wished loved me most… now i am utterly in love with your cradlesong ghost feeding love to you as you starved, hungered and thirsted for redemption, the kind only the Lord can bestow- i tried hard (too hard) to make you believe i am the only one who can hold you when winter frost lingers, soft white snow sadly whispers solitude, for you slipped right out of my sonorous fingers touching antipathy, fearing what can never be known has become my familiar habit- you need forgiveness and i need- you as i walk toward your grave i feel the love you did crave; goodbye, beloved- you were gentle and brave
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12.2.19 Your Best New Poem Poetry Contest Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/1/2020 2:49:00 PM
Wow Luloo, this moving poem speaks to so many and is exquisitely written. A Fave for me! Congratulations on your podium win! Happy New year! May 2020 be kind to you. xxoo
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Date: 12/28/2019 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations Lu Loo! Your touching poem has placed "Third" in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/29/2019 9:06:00 AM
thank you so much Emile- I am honored. This poem was a tough one for me, but you inspired me as always to write my best. Be blessed and thanks again x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/3/2019 9:45:00 AM
Wiping a tear as I read this, very touching Laura, no need for luck or best wishes...this IS a winner! Few write emotion like you do!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2019 8:37:00 AM
thank you dear John, I feel undeserving of your kindness. You are a rock at PS and always will be! thank you much x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/2/2019 12:24:00 PM
Lu, so beautifully penned and emotional, the love drios from each word and I am sure Emile will love it !
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2019 8:36:00 AM
thank you sweet DH! HUgs and hugs to you always x:-)-luloo

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