Stacked Deck

Declared debris?  ...  O' woe is me!
I am a just a chubby club of three..
Beyond the two, ... before the four
Not the card I hoped to be
If I could choose, I'd be much more!

I’d wear a crown, and be the king
But, what the heck….the deck is stacked!
A crying shame…to have a name
that holds no pride, and sad effect
is that I hold no claim to fame!

Even twos get twice the fame!
Just plain ole’ me..
Not five, not eight, not nine, not ten, 
I’m hardly worth a chip to bet
Just a three of clubs…and chubby too
A chubby club! Oh! Woe is me! …

A plain old three of clubs I am
And I get snubbed, at poker games
No one really cares for me
They toss me in among the crowd
Of royalty and joker smiles
Ace defends his rightful place
Dueces often party wild!
I shuffle in, in lower case
Get pushed around the dealer’s place
Those sevens poke their hearts and spades
Into my face!  It's a disgrace!
A racist bunch! …      Why must it be?

The diamonds sparkle in the light
Those snobby queens don’t flirt with me
The hearts, in fact, get all the love
Old Jack, the leader of the pack
hangs out with only rowdy spades

The odds are stacked against my name
Even when I’m old and gray
I will shuffle in, worn, bent, and frayed, 
And while they play their poker game
Some day they’ll use me as a peg
Folded over several ways
To fix that wobbly table leg! 
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Submitted for PD's Contest : 101 Old Poems in a Row #7

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/28/2016 8:36:00 PM
Hi, Carrie,, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:24:00 PM
My entire family are heavy card players, it is what we most do when we gather. I will delight in watching them delight when I read this to them. Clever, cute and even precious. I love your poem and leave congrats on your win ... CayCay p.s. The Libra in me, wants to take the opposite view and debate 3 Clubs value. For therapy, this depressed little card, needs to be played in a game of Shanghai, where when holding the 2, 4 and 5 of clubs, the most valuable draw would be that wee three.
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:50:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 11/24/2011 10:15:00 AM
This is soooo good Carrie. Love the whimsy. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/23/2011 11:38:00 PM
carrie, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:54:00 AM
Excellent write Carrie..Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/6/2011 4:01:00 PM
Club of three, written by an Ace called Carrie. Many congratulations on your terrific poem being well worthy of it's placing in Paula's contest. It's a wonderful write :)
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Date: 6/6/2011 1:46:00 PM
LOL so unique as always a great read & the ending was great too! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:42:00 AM
Although you feel like a 3 in the deck you are a 2 in the contest :) Congratulations on your second place, dear Carrie. Love, iolanda
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:20:00 AM
Your poem is both witty and a bit sad. There are a lot of us who feel like a three of clubs sometimes. Great work, Carrie, and I'm delighted to see you ranking high! Congratulations and love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:14:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 9:26:00 AM
excellent, carrie and better than mine, and yes, we sure did think alike in how we chose our card and the kind of vocabulary we worked into it. I hope it scores super high so I might have a small chance on the list! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:30:00 PM
SOMEBODY help me ! This is such a fantastic write dear poet ! To mine favz if'n ya don't mind Carrie ! Just wonderful, fun to read and anything else which a soul can tack to this write...I agree ! Have a wonderful week dear friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:49:00 AM
Truely enjoyable poem. Loved it.
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. Looks like a winner to me. I totally enjoyed reading it Carrie. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:39:00 AM
Got a good chuckle out of me this morning. This is so cute and clever and very well written. Kinda puts life in perspective when even the three of clubs have an identity crisis, lol. Well done and good luck in the competition. xoxo
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Date: 5/24/2011 5:38:00 PM
terrific piece Carrie.. luv the rhyme so elegant and the story unfolds so neatly luv.. good luck in the contest ...
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:04:00 PM
As very much a last stanza man you certainly nailed your poem...excellent read indeed..cheers.
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