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Ssssshhhhh - the Surprise Party

The invitations have been sent out, and the venue is sublime A Castle in the country oh how I wish that it was mine With sweeping staircases in the entrance hall Crystal chandeliers, oh its perfect for my ball The guests will arrive in their suits and dresses Their masks are in place – I hope no one guesses Dancing by candlelight it is so romantic Not like at a discothèque so fast and so frantic I’ve got the most wonderful caterers in the west Their canapés are amazing, simply the best Ice-cold champagne served in a crystal glass It really is apt for a party of this class It’s secret wedding party for when my beloved and I say ‘I do’ The only thing missing from my surprise party is YOU 07~20~14 Written for Rumor has It Contest ~ Sponsored by Judy Konos ~awarded 1st place~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 10:36:00 AM

LOL, Not really.. But, I'm glad to be here right now. It takes my mind off of things...Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 10:55:00 AM

SAME HERE:-( JAN XX

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 10:12:00 AM

SHHHHHHHHh! :) Thank you for the reply..again :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 10:16:00 AM

Oh you are in a playful mood Linda! Hugs jan xxx

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 8/11/2014 5:16:00 AM

Really Enjoyed this :).. congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 5:18:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sasha:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2014 10:38:00 PM

Hi JAN,, Congrats, on your win. <3 LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2014 3:08:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Abdul Malik

Date: 8/5/2014 1:39:00 PM

Kudos!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 2:06:00 PM

Thanks Abdul for dropping by :-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2014 9:34:00 AM

Ahh!! Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:50:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/4/2014 9:12:00 PM

yay im doin' a happy dance for your win!! yay!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:49:00 AM

I hope you are at the party in disguise - sadly I think my groom as deserted me :-( Hugs Jan xxx

Dr Anuradha Moogi

Date: 8/4/2014 11:03:00 AM

Awesome is the word

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 11:10:00 AM

Oh what a fabulous comment thank you so much Dr Moogi:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/4/2014 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations sweet Jan..:)I echo same comments I have prior to this..:)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Olive I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/4/2014 3:18:00 AM

SSSSHHHHH - May I have the next waltz? Great idea for the contest my friend; small wonder it won first place...BIG congrats - Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 4:26:00 AM

Aww i would be honoured Tim:-) Thanks so much for the lovely comment I'm still flying high from my place in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2014 1:08:00 AM

I like the nice surprising endin, Jan, Congrats on a big win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 1:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/3/2014 7:42:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 1:37:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with your kind comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/3/2014 6:31:00 PM

Well done Jan, beautiful, clever write deserving of the TOP placement!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 6:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2014 4:31:00 PM

Hi Jan.....back again, this time with congratulations on your top podium finish!! // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Paul for your lovely comment and continued support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/3/2014 3:20:00 PM

Well done Jan, is a lovely poem, the surprise is on you lol...Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 3:28:00 PM

I was so delighted to see my name on top of the list it has made my weekend! Thanks for the lovely comment Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx

David Mohn

Date: 8/3/2014 1:12:00 PM

Terrific Jan! Congrats on your 1st place...enjoy your time away :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 1:41:00 PM

Thanks David I have one massive smile on my face - it has made my weekend simply perfect! Hugs jan xxx

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/3/2014 12:51:00 PM

Can I come?? Pleeeeeeease !!!!!!!

Carrie Richards
Date: 8/3/2014 12:56:00 PM

I like your tactics......catch 'em by surprise, before they know what they are in for !!! LOL !!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 12:54:00 PM

Of course - as long as you don't tell the groom! Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2014 12:14:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful piece...hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/3/2014 12:41:00 PM

As you should be :) hugs :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Tim - I am made up to see my name on the top of the podium:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/3/2014 12:02:00 PM

Wouldn't that be fun! Congrats to you on your big #1...BG

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 12:39:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/3/2014 11:28:00 AM

Wow thats cool Jan ! Congrats on first place win !

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 11:54:00 AM

I'm simply over the moon to be on top of the leader board! Thank you so much for dropping by Hugs Jan xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/3/2014 11:23:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 11:53:00 AM

Judy I am simply stunned to see I got a top placement thank you so much you have made my weekend truly amazing! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/28/2014 5:26:00 PM

Aww that is cool, I love the setting, I'd be there in a heartbeat!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2014 7:18:00 PM

Would be AWESOME for us all to meet up cas - maybe one day our dreams can become reality:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 7/22/2014 4:54:00 PM

Jan: This poem has amazing "flow." I felt I was riding a rocket, and I thoroughly enjoyed the trip. Nice, very nice, composition. Blessings! Paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2014 4:57:00 PM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Paul i really appreciate you dropping by Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2014 2:36:00 PM

this is too pretty and exciting to pass, jan, so i'll gate-crush!... swell job; let's party!.. hugggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2014 3:00:00 PM

You would be most welcome Nette! Hugs Jan xxxx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/21/2014 10:38:00 AM

I hope you win. God bless you and happy writing!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2014 11:13:00 AM

Thanks Regina Hugs Jan xx