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Sprites Do Dwell

'Neath the Willows, now cloaked in brume, as streams the night time deepening. Enshrouding all in shadows womb, I espy true loves awakening. Evetide slumber did find a youth, within the mead, where I do dwell. Wont was I, to bespell, forsooth, tis truly, one thing I do well. Mazed, stands young swain, aside his bay, embracing nymph, of flaxen hair. Bedewed, were eyes, by impish fay, for it be a swine, he holds there. Of deep laughter, I do partake. As disenthralled, young swain awakes. For: Shakespearian or English Sonnet contest Host: John Freeman Placement: 7th

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Date: 10/30/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your seventh place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:03:00 PM
Such lovely imagery Paula. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:31:00 PM
Well done and written in true Shakespearean language, Paula. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Paula
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations Paula on your poem's honor in the top ten placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:58:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Moses contest with this exceptional entry and well deserved winning write..luv.. enjoy another sweet victory tonight my friend with luv... where is Kellington tonight? hahaha..
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:18:00 PM
that was adorable, love it, good luck in the contest
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