Lisa Ricci Poet Rhyme

Sprinkle the Sea

"sprinkle the sea"
if I had a wish just one wish what would it be
please grant such thoughts and sprinkle the sea
to have crystal blue waters living within me
my heart and soul would breathe forever free
with this desire comes glorious golden sands
warmth and silk I can hold in both my hands
upon my feet I'll experience splendid strands
feeling such soft crystals meet all my demands
please hear this plea and find in your heart
sprinkle the sea and have it be a new start
so this wonder and I will never be far apart
have her be a place for me to be when I depart
with this wish include the sun so bright
therefore I will live eternally in light

SkyWatcher  -  03-30-17

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Richard Lamoureux May 6, 2017 at 7:58 AM I'm glad I read this one a thoughtful piece. Lisa Ricci May 6, 2017 at 8:38 AM Hello Richard. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I'm touched by your words and generosity. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Enjoy the day and weekend.

Robert Lindley April 17, 2017 at 3:59 PM Love those sprinkles and gentle sea waves you bring in with your soft-verse tide. Very uplifting verses and such smooth and gentle flow..Super 7 my friend. Lisa Ricci April 18, 2017 at 3:37 AM Good Morning Robert. My goodness, thank you ever so much. Your review and commentary are generous to which I never take lightly. I love the sea with all her wonder and beauty. There is nothing on earth like her. Have a wonderful morning and I will see you on your page.

Anil Deo April 7, 2017 at 12:54 PM So, true to the great Italian discoverers like Amerigo Vespucci, & Genoese-Italian, Chris Columbus, you are master of the the Ocean Blue? Did u say you wish to be going to heaven, by way of the Sea? What's wrong with earth/tombs. since u already have within you The "bright" and "crytal waters"? shalom, shalom Lisa. AD

Scott Thirtyseven March 31, 2017 at 6:11 AM Such sprinkles would be a midweek blessing. Lovely sonnet. Lisa Ricci April 18, 2017 at 3:35 AM Good Morning Scott. I just realized I did not respond to your wonderful and generous review. I'm so sorry. I don't know what happened. I do remember having trouble with the site and everything freezing. I'm not sure. I agree with your thoughts of it would be a blessing. Thank you for that and for this review. Again, I'm sorry for any late response. Have a wonderful morning and day.

White Wolf March 31, 2017 at 5:54 AM Your words would make many wordsmiths envious, Lisa! A very well constructed poem you have created here! A pleasure reading you tonight! Lisa Ricci March 31, 2017 at 6:10 AM Dear White Wolf. Good Morning. I am so very honored by such a review and commentary. Never do I take either lightly. Coming from a composer and poet such as yourself I am speechless. Thank You Thank You. Enjoy the day.

Darren White March 31, 2017 at 1:24 AM Can I have some sprinkles here too Lisa? In this hospital everything is just too bright and too clean :) Darren White March 31, 2017 at 8:14 AM I smile at you :) Lisa Ricci March 31, 2017 at 5:08 AM Oh Darren. Good Morning. Its wonderful to see you. How are you. Be patient and time will tell of any result. My goodness I'm honored you took the time to visit my page. Honestly. And yes, without saying the sprinkles are on their way for you. Now behave yourself and come back to us here. You remain in our prayers. Have a low pain level day and thank you a million times over.

Constance La France March 30, 2017 at 4:46 PM Lisa I love the title and oh I would like some sea sprinkles too, wonderfully penned~ Lisa Ricci March 31, 2017 at 5:04 AM Good Morning Broken Wings. By all means I will gladly share. Thank you very much for this wonderful review. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Never do I take your visits lightly. Enjoy the morning.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 30, 2017 at 1:42 PM An aqua sea loving wish, u mean u wish to live near the sea right?. Anyways it is a sublime imaginative poem crafted swell. Kudos for the awesome rhyming too. Pls do review my latest poem too. Lisa Ricci March 30, 2017 at 3:21 PM Hello S.zaynab. Thank you very much. What I mean is to have the sea with me always. Thank you for such graciousness. Enjoy the night.

Emile Pinet March 30, 2017 at 12:14 PM The words are beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. Emile. Lisa Ricci March 30, 2017 at 3:19 PM Hello Emile. Thank you for such a generous and gracious review. I love your intake of the entry. Never do I take reviews or words lightly. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry. Enjoy the night.

Anne-Marie Coreggia March 30, 2017 at 9:21 AM Lisa, may the sea never cease to inspire you, for our greatest delight:) Amitiés Lisa Ricci March 30, 2017 at 10:51 AM Hi Anne-Marie. Thank you Thank you a million times over. Honestly. Words can not express my appreciation. I adore the sea now and always. Its my hope I capture something of her for someone to see. Have a wonderful afternoon.

Chris Green March 30, 2017 at 6:19 AM Sounds like a wonderful wish to me as well as the addendum to also add the sun. An uplifting and soothing feeling accompanies your thoughts today Lisa. Your poem is absolutely beautiful. Lisa Ricci March 30, 2017 at 10:49 AM Hi Chris. Thank you very much for being my eyes. I've had trouble all week with the site and the connections/settings. I even told Tim. I don't know why. It has taken me forever to either post review or reply. I posted this entry and then I had an appointment. Thank you again for everything. Hopefully this won't continue. Have a wonderful afternoon.