Andrea Dietrich Poet Monorhyme

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Springtime - Nature Says

Nature says create and rejuvenate.

Beasts cooperate and repopulate.

Sun’s rays dominate; showers saturate!

Blooms that fascinate soon accumulate.

Bees don’t hesitate to participate

as they pollinate. Isn’t springtime great!


Written April 28, 2017 
for John Hamilton's  Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 Contest

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Bl Devnath May 17, 2017 at 11:37 AM Wonderfully done my dear lovely friend. Congrats. Loved always, bl

Carole Duet May 3, 2017 at 10:44 PM Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.

Carole Duet May 3, 2017 at 10:44 PM Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.

Connie Marcum Wong May 3, 2017 at 7:01 PM Andrea, this poem is very deserving of first place! Your internal rhyme makes this monorhyme exquisite! It never sounds forced and flows off the tongue like honey. Brava and big congratulations my friend. This s going into my faves. I will bet it will be used as an example of the monorhyme form here at Soup.; ) 7

Dean Wood May 3, 2017 at 10:44 AM Congratulations! I really enjoyed this fun little poem. A well deserved win!

Mike Bayles May 2, 2017 at 1:20 PM I like this poem. It's playful

Paul Callus May 1, 2017 at 4:54 PM Yes, Andrea! Springtime is great, so is this Monorhyme. What could have stumped many of us you tackled with utmost ease and ability. I see that you placed first with this entry ... Congratulations! Regards ~ paul.

Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2017 at 11:06 AM A group effort! Congrats on your deserved top win, Andrea!

John Michaels May 1, 2017 at 11:01 AM Just swinging around again to congratulate you on your First Place! Well done! Regards, John.

Sara Chansarkar May 1, 2017 at 8:51 AM Wow, this one is superb Andrea!Congrats!

Becca Teagan May 1, 2017 at 8:46 AM Love the monorhymes! looks like you won with this one.. congratulations!

James Inman May 1, 2017 at 7:36 AM Impressive Andrea.

Supraja Kannan May 1, 2017 at 7:17 AM So beautifully written Andrea... Congratulations on your well deserved win.... I loved it... Lovely imagery... A big 7...

Jesse Zerlaut May 1, 2017 at 2:11 AM Springtime is indeed great! Between you and me.. mostly for the morels I find! hehe. Love your poem, thank you for sharing

Reason A. Poteet May 1, 2017 at 12:43 AM Great response to the rhyming prompt. Congratulations is well-deserved.

White Wolf April 30, 2017 at 7:55 PM congrats to you, Andrea! This is really good! Loved it!

Jennifer Walker April 30, 2017 at 7:24 PM Clever how you rhyme the important words and they work so well.

Brian Davey April 30, 2017 at 6:23 PM Great win Andrea, your internal rhymes were spot on. Congrats

Alexis Y. April 30, 2017 at 5:06 PM Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Joseph May April 30, 2017 at 4:51 PM Congrats on a great win Andrea

Eve Roper April 30, 2017 at 2:56 PM Wonderful and very perfect, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. ~*

Jan Allison April 30, 2017 at 2:32 PM way to go Andrea I knew this would place high for you:-) :-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton April 30, 2017 at 2:03 PM Obviously a great rhyme, shared number 1 congrats Andrea!

Frederic Parker April 30, 2017 at 11:00 AM you make this contest look easy to do really well...good luck

Abdullah Alhemaidy April 30, 2017 at 9:45 AM Lovely saying! Nature sings to those who carefully listen.

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