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Spring's Mystique--Split Haiku

lavender florets sway their hems to a gold wind... as queen bee jiggles aisle of lush gardens invite morn's jaybirds on flight... coo cooing sweet tunes dew bathes newborn plants evergreen their christened ribs... from heaven's blessings such bright assemblage displays lush April's glory when spring thrills charmed hearts MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKUS Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose 4/10/2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/7/2016 11:09:00 AM

Congratulation my lovely friend for your win with this beautiful haiku. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 9:49:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~

Lin Lane

Date: 4/6/2016 3:15:00 PM

Well done and congratulations, nette.

Joseph May

Date: 4/6/2016 6:16:00 AM

A lovely write...Congrats on your win

Balveen Cheema

Date: 4/6/2016 5:46:00 AM

Awesome, Nette!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:09:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus nette..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 5:34:00 PM

yours was so cute and inventive. Good to see it again , BIG congrats.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/5/2016 5:10:00 PM

Sweet imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2016 5:07:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/5/2016 4:56:00 PM

Nette, a beautiful split haiku, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/5/2016 3:07:00 PM

Nette, your creative imagery with words always amazes me! Wonderful set of haikus here! Good luck in the contest :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/3/2016 12:37:00 PM

A really strong spring write from you Nette, So many aspects to enjoy..' hope all is well there, Joe..

Joseph May

Date: 4/3/2016 6:36:00 AM

Love the first one...great write Nette

Len Gasun

Date: 4/3/2016 1:54:00 AM

Chain of precious gems my dear friend, Nette! Super 7 and fave. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and big hug, lorry

Len Gasun
Date: 4/3/2016 1:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot also for stopping by on my poem. God bless!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2016 1:24:00 AM

These are lovely Nette. I hope you had a nice Easter. I haven't attempted this contest. #7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2016 3:36:00 PM

love how you did yours, Nette. VERY nice.

Lisa Galson

Date: 4/2/2016 6:08:00 AM

Lovely images! Serenity!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 5:18:00 AM

What a beauty nette.. Sure winner..best wishes

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/1/2016 9:55:00 PM

I want to live in your world! You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Peace my friend:)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 8:15:00 PM

you painted such glorious images Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/1/2016 8:14:00 PM

Beautiful! I just want to stay in your poem and smell the flowers and enjoy the scene :) :)