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Spring's Gold Hiku

spring's dark storm passes

                at the end of the rainbow . . .

                                    fields of gold yarrow

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2025 3:53:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2025 4:57:00 AM

A very descriptive one with a subtle meaning. I had some yarrow in my garden at one time a long time ago, but it did not make it. I think the area was too wet at times and at times too dry. At least there was gold at the end of that rainbow. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/6/2025 1:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/30/2022 4:48:00 PM

Another welcome to spring Haiku. Well written and a joy to read. Thanks, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2022 7:42:00 PM

Brilliant imagery , Andrea ! Congratulations on your win !

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:29:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/7/2022 12:07:00 AM

Delicate and pretty Great job, wonderful win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2022 2:26:00 PM

That is an interesting plant which grows wild here but apparently there are versions of cultivated species. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Your visits lighted up my day. Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/6/2022 10:01:00 AM

Lovely Haiku... Congratulations, Andrea Pangie

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/5/2022 3:40:00 PM

Congratulations! on you win, Outstanding poem. Andrea, Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/4/2022 1:10:00 PM

What wonderful imagery!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/4/2022 8:45:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Well, "fields of gold yarrow" spell allergy attacks for me, but they are lovely nonetheless. A few sneezes never killed anyone...I don't think.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/4/2022 7:50:00 AM

love this one, Andrea