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Spring's chill, breath grows cool, music escape into air as it drools with minimum coos. Heavens set ablaze reflecting spills abreast shadowed hills, merging in a brilliant lover's dream in the valley below setting off fireworks beams. Beating once more reddish gold, caramel corn morn spiraling out bold, clouds drenching in smoke grew tipped with white opening up to the sea of blue. Mundane gather with squeal laughter riding a massive Ferris wheel. World melts away indigo bliss savoring lilac skies full of magic and grandeur smiling back.
2/16/2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:13:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your top win, Eve. Well done.
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Date: 2/19/2018 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your great win.
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place for the lovely poem, Eve ...
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations Eve on your win. Tom
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Eve! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Eve! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 3:43:00 PM
Vibrant imagery brings your poem to living and breathing life Eve. Congratulations on your first place win with this beauty. ~Susan
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:20:00 PM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations on your 1.place, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:48:00 AM
Lovely lines creating vivid imagery Eve.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:35:00 AM
i think this is the way a poem is supposed to go Mine is just witty lines, but I do not know anything else But I will try (:
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful, Eve ;)
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
Love the imagery, Eve.
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