Spring Wheat

Flour
Power
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 4:38 AM
Great write uncomplicated simple but it is the staff of life...I enjoy most products made from flour...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Spears Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Interesting play on words. Congrats on the contest.
Pickett Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Butter me a piece of bread will ya....Short and sweet...God Bless Friend...Taz
Delacroix Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 8:41 PM
Interesting concept, Robert. I like this. And thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Best wishes, Caroline.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 12:30 PM
I like this play on words, Robert. I never would have thought of it. Good job! Regards, Gerard
Bono Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 9:12 AM
yes indeed spring is coming.Love to look at all the pretty colors.2 words can say so much.Have a good day.
Pickett Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Cool...God Bless...Taz
Mccue Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 11:33 AM
FUNNY PUN
James Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Contrags on your win, Robert. Nice angle
Owens Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...cute footle...Marty
Fraser Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Kool footle Robert, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >>James
White Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:07 PM
Congrats on the win my friend
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:52 PM
hahaha. corny(or should I say Wheaties), but I love it. congratulatons!
Devonshire Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Your poem and James' are quite similar, but a different meaning. Clever pun in this one, Robert. Congratulations on your success! Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Now Robert, Didn't I say that you didn't need my "good luck" wish?? Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!! I thought this was really good!! Peace, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Good play on words here. Congratulations. Joyce
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April 9, 2010 at 12:16 PM
I enjoyed this clever poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Richards Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 8:04 AM
I enjoyed this one, would have placed it higher!:) Congratulations on your H.M. Robert!! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Congrats Robert on your HM in the footle contest.. an enjoyable read and wonderful honor for u to enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Footle contest Robert. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 12:55 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Robert.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'EVERYMAN'S EKPHRASIS' is now open
Palli Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 10:42 AM
excellent!
George   Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Very creative,Robert. A winner for sure! Thank you for all your kind comments. I have been away for some time now and just getting back and getting caught up. Love, Lainie
Haick Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Dear Robert, I smell fresh bread right now!! Mama's fresh baked bread...that wonderful scent wafting throughout the house..Thanks for making me recall that precious memory, today..I'll have to bake some bread this weekend!! I wish you good luck in Brian's contest..but then again, I don't believe you need it..it's a Winner..Peace, love, Audrey
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April 6, 2010 at 1:04 PM
So right you are! Got a chuckle out of this one. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable poem with us and for your comment. Have a good day! Karen
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