Spring Vs Summer

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~Spring versus Summer~ (Rhyme) Spring is slowly leaving And summer is swiftly arriving And for me that really matter Because the days are getting hotter I love spring but mostly I love fall That's when I really have a ball That's when the days are just kinder By reminding me when days are just better! I hate to see spring go, And for summer to my door just to show, I don't like to feel all the heat, Because that's when my body takes the beat I prefer much better the cold weather But I like it more when we are together, Lots of rain and winds start to fall and blow, Spring is about to exit and take her bow Spring is slowly leaving And summer is swiftly arriving It makes me sad to see spring go And for summer to my door just to show. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2007 January.31.2015

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 2/10/2015 9:34:00 AM

I fully understand. I love my shoulders bare in summer, kissed by warm breeze. You have penned a perfect contrast of seasons dear to you. bless you.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 7:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Iris , for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/3/2015 5:41:00 PM

Now I'm a lover of spring and summer, I hate the winter, but I love this poem of your the imagery my young poet is elegant and is full of natural beauty of the written word, I'm very flattered by your praise of my poem, thank you my friend, take care of yourself and I am looking forward to reading more, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Cheri, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/2/2015 12:18:00 PM

Just got done shoveling the latest snow fall so I must admit I am looking forward to more sunshine. Thank you for reminding me that Summer is on its way.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Robert, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/31/2015 9:49:00 PM

How are you my love? Your poem is about my two favourite seasons! They can't come soon enough! Dearest ladylove, when I think of Spring, I think of you... love and joy, Jack XOX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/1/2015 10:56:00 AM

Hi Jack! Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments! Ah, Jack, you're always so sweet to me! Much appreciated! I'll visit you very soon. okay. God bless you! :)Love and hugs!xxxx D.