Spring, the Magician

Hocus...


    Crocus!





* Placed 3rd in Brian Strand's contest, "April Footle".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Herzog Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Dear Donna: Short, but definitely way too sweet! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 5:48 PM
Very clever Donna... a two-word poem that speaks volumes! Best wishes, Keith
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 4:38 PM
I laughed outloud. It must be the gardener in me. Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.
George   Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:06 AM
ASWESOME!!!!!!! LOL lAINIE
Moreno Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Nicely penned...Raul
Shango Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 9:21 AM
The bulbs do break out suddenly like that. Powerful! Love
Augustus Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Very nice! It is almost deep and cute at the same time. Brilliant!
Kelly Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Great call , Donna ... Well done ..
Ginn Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Oh I remember this I loved it CONGRATS
Townsend Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 5:45 PM
I like this one! Truly magical... Congratulations on your win! Smiles from Lolita
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 5:41 PM
Now this is terrific..I've been smiling about this one since I read it. conrats on your win. BG
Gass Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Donna! This is a wonderful Footle! Love, Robin
Spence Sr Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 3:11 PM
LoL!!! Someone must be ready to sit by the pond. I heard that sound before. Awesome! ~Joseph
Winter Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 1:10 PM
~lol~ I never saw this! Seriously brilliant! Congrats on your win! Love, Shar
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March 15, 2009 at 1:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Way to go! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 11:32 AM
I loved this one!! Yes..a bit of magic happening in springtime! ~ Congratulations on this winning poem! ~ Carrie
Swanson Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Very clever footle Donna! :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! Love, Amy
Strand Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Congrats on your success in my footle contest Donna Rgds Brian
Wood Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 2:29 PM
Cute.
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Tulips? Julips! Love your great footle and wish you well in the contest. Carolyn
Hudson Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 2:45 PM
good one....clever!-AA
Strand Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Donna.Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Good one Donna - made me chuckle - God Bless, MJ
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March 8, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Wow! This is such a creative slant on the contest topic. The title works so well with the poem. I think this will be in the winners circle. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Ginn Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Oh I remember as a kid mom pointing out the crocus coming up through the snow to me they were like magic. Nice work Donna. Thanks for the memories.
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