Spring Sours

From within the frost frozen bare boarded shed with its loosely hung zee braced door agape, the spring light peeked. Warming the woodsheds King pine planks, toasting the ten penny nails, popping the planks to a toe-stubbing height. Door slamming dashes barefoot through the obstacle course of cord, tinder, rake and hoe, to the semi attached outhouse. Drawers half down, butt bitten by March’s wind, the two holer waits, lye bucket at the base. Curled, yellow-brown, newspaper pages from 1890, the shade of Uncle George’s pipe stained teeth, wiggle in the wind; as do I when an updraft attempts to speed dry my bottom. I make a half-assed mad dash to the kitchen door. Half way there I stop awestruck at the gapping door to the kitchen garden. Raspberry red, tit tipped rhubarb buds and stalks, warmed by the sheltered spring sun set my mouth to drool. So stands, a waylaid girl child in transit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/23/2012 4:30:00 PM
A very entertaining write, Debbie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/22/2012 2:15:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs Ralph
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:26:00 AM
congrats Debbie on a stellar win for this majestic portrait of Spring luv.. working on your contest too..
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Date: 2/22/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~P.D.'s~ "Spring~tease" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations Carol a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:48:00 PM
Debbie, A beautiful write. Congrats on making PD's winners' list...............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:00:00 PM
DEBBIE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful SPRING poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:27:00 PM
THIS SHOULD WIN!!! :) Soup mail!!
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Date: 6/7/2011 4:48:00 AM
A butt bitten by March's wind? This is a hoot! I almost forgot about the lye bucket and the ambiance of the sacred out house at my great great grandma's house in Lebanon, Ohio. This is wonderful and the details remind me of a wonderful time at grandma's. Thanks for tickling the recesses of my mind. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:02:00 PM
sounds like my week at a cabin in the forest last yr. w/my girls....parade of ticks for sure...I just made "rhubarb crisp" sweetened w/raw honey, you'd have loved it! jimbo
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:09:00 PM
Love the imagery and story, Debbie. I kept rereading it, and it opened memory's gates. We used to go to my brother's camps up North for Thanksgiving. The one we'd stayed at sounds exactly like here. Gas lights...only in the kitchen. The wood stove we'd used to cook on, and heat the place up. Oh ya...and the inevidable outhouse. Your place sounds more posh..a two seater?:) We'd go back every year...my son always brought along a friend or two. Thanks for the memories, Mikki
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Date: 6/5/2011 4:15:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work about a barefoot boy..Good luck in the contest with this winning work...Thanks for stopping by and giving a kind review of my work,..Thanks for the suggestion on the form of my "The Mirage"..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:54:00 PM
thank you for entering my contes Debbie, soup mail
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