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Spring Song

SPRING SONG First warm day and this nut-brown flavor scurrying bits of life with no eye-charging breadth sifting falling There is a sharp denial of snow an impossibility of winter Not happiness Not sadness Not relief Acceptance! Deep within the ear within the soul a hammering Builders are busy And this almost sawdust in the air Time for rusty old things becoming new Somewhere ‘neath the dirty snow the cached store water babes are bathing and I walk I glide I breathe!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2011 4:33:00 PM
spring in the air sun shinging so bright and warm to the skin, this was a very special piece of great poetry. love spring after a long cold winter, great write.
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:57:00 AM
Fantastic Free verse dear poet ! I just love the way you encourage the readers to pick at your write with each feel of your thoughts ! Great write Sir ! Have a wonderful weekend ! much love, james
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Date: 3/17/2011 5:04:00 PM
Youve written quite a lovely piece..I like how it reads on the page..BG
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:46:00 PM
Every word and the feelings you expressed welcoming the spring felt by me here in NC, daver
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:58:00 PM
I'm up here in Nebraska, far from my home in Texas.. and it seems like spring is ready to release its tune.... yes. Breath like the birds... and as far as snow.. I was hoping to see snow.. I don't care if its dirty snow... love your poem... p.d.
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:24:00 AM
Your poem is delightful, Daver. I'm sure the arrival of spring is finally coming to your area. Yes, maybe there's a bit of snow left, but keep listening for those water babes -- they want summer NOW. Very cool poem that leaves the reader breathless for spring. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks.
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