Spring Song

SPRING SONG

First warm day
                      and
                            this nut-brown flavor
    scurrying bits of life
                                              with
                                     no eye-charging breadth
           sifting
                      falling   
There is a sharp denial of snow
                             an impossibility of winter
Not happiness
Not sadness
Not relief
Acceptance!
Deep within the ear
                                within the soul
    a hammering
Builders are busy
                           And
    this    almost    sawdust
                                           in the air
Time for rusty old things becoming new
Somewhere
                    ‘neath the dirty snow
                                        the cached store
    water babes are bathing
      and
I walk
I glide
I breathe!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/12/2011 4:33:00 PM
spring in the air sun shinging so bright and warm to the skin, this was a very special piece of great poetry. love spring after a long cold winter, great write.
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:57:00 AM
Fantastic Free verse dear poet ! I just love the way you encourage the readers to pick at your write with each feel of your thoughts ! Great write Sir ! Have a wonderful weekend ! much love, james
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Date: 3/17/2011 5:04:00 PM
Youve written quite a lovely piece..I like how it reads on the page..BG
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:46:00 PM
Every word and the feelings you expressed welcoming the spring felt by me here in NC, daver
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:58:00 PM
I'm up here in Nebraska, far from my home in Texas.. and it seems like spring is ready to release its tune.... yes. Breath like the birds... and as far as snow.. I was hoping to see snow.. I don't care if its dirty snow... love your poem... p.d.
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:24:00 AM
Your poem is delightful, Daver. I'm sure the arrival of spring is finally coming to your area. Yes, maybe there's a bit of snow left, but keep listening for those water babes -- they want summer NOW. Very cool poem that leaves the reader breathless for spring. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks.
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