Spring Offerings

I liked to take my baby brother
And my little sister too
And ramble in the countryside
When the spring was fresh and new.
We would take our Easter baskets 
And would fill them  with delights
Culled from the drifts of wild flowers,
As part of our springtime rites.

We would take our gifts to Mother
And would hang them on her door.
She would say that she had never seen 
Such lovely flowers before.
She said she loved our floral designs 
Made from spring's first dandelions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/12/2015 10:59:00 PM
Makes me feel so beautifully nostalgic, this lovely sonnet with its amazing imagery! A-7, dear Joyce! Pandita
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Date: 7/16/2015 7:25:00 PM
A well crafted sonnet my friend! A true pleasure to read and to enjoy. A7
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Date: 6/13/2015 9:20:00 PM
Our memories of the past or so dear to us. My granddaughter has brought those memories back by picking those same dandelions and bring them to nana with love. a 7 hugs Eve
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:54:00 PM
awww, lovely write, dear Joyce. Hope you are feeling much better by now xxx
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Date: 5/8/2015 11:19:00 PM
Congrats Joyce :)
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:54:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your win for your lovely Sonnet that tells us about your personal Spring experiences as a young child. Enjoyed reading it! Hugs, Sanddra
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:39:00 PM
this is charming joyce many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:37:00 PM
JOYCE, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:28:00 PM
Joyce. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:29:00 AM
You write so well - with well-chosen words and rare clarity. 7++++!!!
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:47:00 PM
Very nice Joyce!
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Date: 4/26/2015 6:32:00 PM
a beautiful memory to have, enjoyed -p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:56:00 PM
So sweet..I wish we still made May Baskets and hung then on the neighbors door. It is a fond memory of my childhood. BG
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