Paula Goldsmith Poet Limerick

Spring Is In the Air

Beautiful birds are singing to me 
high up in the trees with a big bee 
bending to pick some flowers 
my buns shown like towers                                                       
they were hanging out for all to see 
 
 
 

Date Written:2/18/2022 

4 Place 

Spring in air Contest Judged: 2/23/2022  
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Mystic Rose Rose February 24, 2022 at 4:27 PM You splendored this poem with great beauty Paula, congratulations on your winning poem, well done :) Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 10:15 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write on spring. Have a great/blessed day.................

Meghan Hutchings February 24, 2022 at 8:40 AM Congratulations, Paula! I love the humor you mixed with spring in your limerick! Way to go! God bless and much love...Meghan Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 10:14 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my humor in this limerick write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Paulette Calasibetta February 24, 2022 at 7:23 AM Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest! A splendid write. :)Paulette Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 10:13 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Margarita Lillico February 24, 2022 at 6:56 AM Sooo funny! Congrats! Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 9:02 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun/funny write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2022 at 6:39 AM A humorous Limerick that caused me to laugh at the thought Paula. A perfect Limerick my friend. So happy to see it receive a high placement. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 9:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad I gave you a laugh with this write. Laughs and smiles are fun to give out. I love to give them outs. Have a great/blessed day.................

Len Gasun February 24, 2022 at 3:40 AM Wow! This is a delightful limerick my dear friend, Paula. I extremely enjoyed reading. It gave me lots of smiles. I love it. Congratulations on your superb write and great win! Thanks for sharing. Have a lovely day. Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thanks for your note, very kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write with smiles. I love to give out smiles. Here are some Smiles~Catch them. Have a great/blessed day.................

Mohan Chutani February 23, 2022 at 8:55 PM Thankyou for participating in my contest. Your connect to Spring brought back the naughty images amidst bird songs that most of us may have also been through. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2022 at 11:04 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your fun "Spring" contest. I enjoyed writing this spring write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2022 at 7:41 PM Congratulations, Paula! Humor in Spring! Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2022 at 11:02 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this humor spring write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Joseph P. DiMino February 22, 2022 at 8:54 AM :)Oh well, your heart (and bottom) was in the right place. That's what counts. Love it! Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2022 at 11:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. You made me laugh. (Thanks) Yep, my heart/bottom were in the right place. Watch when you bend over. Have a great/blessed day.................

Valsa George February 21, 2022 at 8:57 PM This is indeed so much in keeping with the tenet of a limerick. Couldn't help chuckling to myself. Laughing at oneself is the best way to derive fun. All the best in the contest! Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2022 at 10:58 AM Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad I made you laugh. I love to made people laugh. Have a great/blessed day.................

Michael Tor February 21, 2022 at 3:56 PM Loved this Paula , made me smile.... Blessings. Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2022 at 10:56 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. So this one made you smile??? I love to made people smile. Here catch a "smile." Have a great/blessed day.................

Gershon Wolf February 20, 2022 at 7:29 PM You certainly made me laugh, Paula, WITH you, not at you!! You get the 'good sport' award. Cheers, Gershon Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2022 at 10:42 AM Thanks for your note. Glad I made you laugh with this write. I love to made people laugh. Thanks for giving me the 'good sport' award. This is something I have always wanted. Have a blessed day.................

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2022 at 10:02 PM haha. CUTE one Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this cute spring write. Glad I gave you a laugh. I love to give out laughs. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Alexis Y. February 18, 2022 at 2:26 PM Hi Paula, You’ve a good “ spring” limerick for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2022 at 11:49 AM Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this cute/fun spring write. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Debra L Brown February 18, 2022 at 1:41 PM Hi Paula, Enjoyed the poem. Interesting, Birds, Bees and Buns. Thanks for the smile. Blessings ~ Debra Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2022 at 11:48 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this one. Smiles and more smiles. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Ronald D Thompson February 18, 2022 at 11:03 AM Spring is my favourite season. Great write Paula...Ron x Paula Goldsmith February 18, 2022 at 11:42 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I also love spring. It is a pretty time of the year. Have a blessed day.................

Paulette Calasibetta February 18, 2022 at 10:36 AM Thank you for bringing the beauty of a busy bee and all her imagery! Looking forward to spring! :)Paulette Paula Goldsmith February 18, 2022 at 11:40 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun spring write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............

Anitha Jayasankar February 18, 2022 at 10:32 AM A fresh beautiful scenery of spring you created with your words dear Paula... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith February 18, 2022 at 11:30 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun spring write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............