Spring Is In the Air

Beautiful birds are singing to me
high up in the trees with a big bee
bending to pick some flowers
my buns shown like towers
they were hanging out for all to see
Date Written:2/18/2022
4 Place
Spring in air Contest Judged: 2/23/2022
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/24/2022 4:27:00 PM
You splendored this poem with great beauty Paula, congratulations on your winning poem, well done :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write on spring. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/24/2022 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Paula! I love the humor you mixed with spring in your limerick! Way to go! God bless and much love...Meghan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my humor in this limerick write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/24/2022 7:23:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest! A splendid write. :)Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/24/2022 6:56:00 AM
Sooo funny! Congrats!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun/funny write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/24/2022 6:39:00 AM
A humorous Limerick that caused me to laugh at the thought Paula. A perfect Limerick my friend. So happy to see it receive a high placement. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad I gave you a laugh with this write. Laughs and smiles are fun to give out. I love to give them outs. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/24/2022 3:40:00 AM
Wow! This is a delightful limerick my dear friend, Paula. I extremely enjoyed reading. It gave me lots of smiles. I love it. Congratulations on your superb write and great win! Thanks for sharing. Have a lovely day.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thanks for your note, very kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write with smiles. I love to give out smiles. Here are some Smiles~Catch them. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/23/2022 8:55:00 PM
Thankyou for participating in my contest. Your connect to Spring brought back the naughty images amidst bird songs that most of us may have also been through. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your fun "Spring" contest. I enjoyed writing this spring write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/23/2022 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula! Humor in Spring!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2022 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this humor spring write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/22/2022 8:54:00 AM
:)Oh well, your heart (and bottom) was in the right place. That's what counts. Love it!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2022 11:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. You made me laugh. (Thanks) Yep, my heart/bottom were in the right place. Watch when you bend over. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/21/2022 8:57:00 PM
This is indeed so much in keeping with the tenet of a limerick. Couldn't help chuckling to myself. Laughing at oneself is the best way to derive fun. All the best in the contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2022 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad I made you laugh. I love to made people laugh. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/21/2022 3:56:00 PM
Loved this Paula , made me smile.... Blessings.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2022 10:56:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. So this one made you smile??? I love to made people smile. Here catch a "smile." Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 2/20/2022 7:29:00 PM
You certainly made me laugh, Paula, WITH you, not at you!! You get the 'good sport' award. Cheers, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/21/2022 10:42:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad I made you laugh with this write. I love to made people laugh. Thanks for giving me the 'good sport' award. This is something I have always wanted. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 2/18/2022 10:02:00 PM
haha. CUTE one
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this cute spring write. Glad I gave you a laugh. I love to give out laughs. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 2/18/2022 2:26:00 PM
Hi Paula, You’ve a good “ spring” limerick for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this cute/fun spring write. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 2/18/2022 1:41:00 PM
Hi Paula, Enjoyed the poem. Interesting, Birds, Bees and Buns. Thanks for the smile. Blessings ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2022 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this one. Smiles and more smiles. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 2/18/2022 11:03:00 AM
Spring is my favourite season. Great write Paula...Ron x
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2022 11:42:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I also love spring. It is a pretty time of the year. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 2/18/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thank you for bringing the beauty of a busy bee and all her imagery! Looking forward to spring! :)Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2022 11:40:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun spring write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............
Date: 2/18/2022 10:32:00 AM
A fresh beautiful scenery of spring you created with your words dear Paula... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2022 11:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun spring write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............
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