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Her face lit up like a kaleidoscope of colors as she slowly put it in her hands and sobs, sweet spring green eyes of hope crinkles at the corners as her world spins. She was stunning, with faint flavorful scent that drew his gaze, like a moth to a flame. Quite taken with her grace kept his nights spent in deep reflections on how to lay claim. In a garden of white roses, he knelt. He took a deep breath, "Will you marry me?" Her gaze met his and he saw she would melt glowing with all the colors of the sea. Their heart soared with love and joyful wonder Words said, "I love you, you and no other."
splashes of color heartiness of emotion till death do us part
9/10/2017

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Date: 9/13/2017 9:24:00 AM
Eve, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful write
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Date: 9/13/2017 7:00:00 AM
Congrats Eve!
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:53:00 AM
I liked your interpretation of the painting, the opening line sets the imagery of the poem... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:29:00 PM
- Beautiful imagery, dear Eve - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:13:00 AM
I liked your poem. Especially liked the picture. That is pretty. I've always wanted to write a Sonnet...maybe I'll try one. Does it have to have a fixed syllable count? I'm bad with that. Lovely. Emma :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:08:00 AM
What a beautiful and inspiring write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading your masterful poem here this morning, you have written such a gorgeous piece, I am in awe of it's drawing power! Just lovely, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/10/2017 7:23:00 PM
Lovely words Eve, constructed with an obvious romantic pen! Enjoyed this so much, all the best, hope it's a winner! Regards, Craig
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Date: 9/10/2017 6:54:00 PM
A beautiful and romantic write Eve, with wonderful imagery, flow, rhythm and rhyme. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/10/2017 6:18:00 PM
The poetry is lovely - the picture intriguing. Did you happen to do the picture?
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/10/2017 6:20:00 PM
No, this was done by another artist. Thank you for the compliment ~`*
Date: 9/10/2017 5:33:00 PM
Love this beautiful piece--wonderful imagination, Eve--good luck for a win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/10/2017 6:21:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Vijay, and the good luck. Hugs eve ~`*

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