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Spring haiku contest sponsored by tania Kitchin 03/31/25

xanthic daffodils swaying in the zephyr breeze ~ blackbirds build new nests

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2025 2:47:00 AM

A very beautiful image is brought out picturesquely. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/7/2025 8:23:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2025 10:31:00 AM

Cool use of some words starting with difficult letters. Congrats, dear Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:12:00 AM

- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Jan :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/6/2025 7:43:00 AM

Oh what beautiful imagery Jan. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/6/2025 7:00:00 AM

Jan, beautiful spring imagery, congratulations on your first place win.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/1/2025 9:45:00 AM

Jan, love it. We have some daffodils in our yard and they do make an impression at this time of year. Really amazing to watch and your haiku captures their essence in a charming natural way! Smiles!!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/31/2025 4:32:00 PM

Springy haiku! Have a nice season lovely Jan, hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2025 1:18:00 PM

- The birth of spring is a wonderful time ... lovely haiku, Jan :) - Best wishes :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/31/2025 10:11:00 AM

A lovely spring image Jan, it's been a long time coming but is most welcome. Hope the boiler works are going well. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2025 10:15:00 AM

im so glad it didnt break down in winter Tom at least its not freezing cold and we have small heaters and an immersion heater for hot water thankfully! the men started work today tom, they are re positioning it in the garage rather than the kitchen - more work involved with pipes etc but it will be well worth it! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 3/31/2025 9:19:00 AM

It's the time of year for renewal and new birth...xanthic works for me. Blue Jays are building a nest in the shrubs beneath my window. lol It's fun watching them.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2025 9:45:00 AM

hubby has been mending our fence from the storm damage and putting in new posts. its possibly deterred the blue tits from nesting but we did see them near the box recently i do love this time of year Lin! xx