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forest newly dressed wearing her emerald gown she dreams of summer Submitted to Any poem written in April Contest sponsored by Laura Loo 10th April 2016

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Date: 7/20/2016 7:59:00 PM
Jan, an emerald of a Haiku. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/21/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Sonia I'm so pleased with the way this poem turned out:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/15/2016 11:32:00 AM
Jan, a beautiful haiku lovely lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/21/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/24/2016 9:19:00 PM
Heart touching haiku......hugs
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Date: 4/25/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2016 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Jan. Emerald gown simile with forest is exceptional.
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Date: 4/12/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2016 8:24:00 AM
Hi Jan, an excellent Haiku. The image painted is wonderful. A Lovely dream of Spring. So few words and yet they sing into the mind. Well Jan, this wonderful Haiku is richly deserving of a seven and it goes straight into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/11/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike:-) I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2016 7:33:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku, Jan. #7. T.J
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Date: 4/11/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thanks TJ - I must thank YOU for this poem as I was inspired by the 'evergreen' line in your contest. I was looking for an image for another poem and when I found this I was inspired to write this haiku - i normally write and then find an image:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 8:14:00 PM
How we all wait for spring. Lovely Hugs Edith
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:04:00 AM
It has arrived here Mama bear ... but today we have April showers:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 7:12:00 PM
as I dream of her! Lovely!
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:03:00 AM
Sweet dreams my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 3:02:00 PM
let's dream on and forage
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Date: 4/10/2016 3:05:00 PM
It's such a stunning image Catherine I was compelled to write about it - i found it quite by accident when i was looking for a pic for another poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 1:35:00 PM
intense imagery. I can visualize Jan. For the picture I am thankful. She is the deity of the forest. Love.
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Date: 4/10/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Rajat - I found the image when I was looking for one for another poem - i thought it was so beautiful and wrote this poem based on the image:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 8:38:00 AM
This must be one of your best haiku, Jan...Well done! hugs // paul
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Date: 4/10/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thanks SO much Paul - I do struggle with the final line, but I penned this very quickly last night and am so pleased with the result:-) I found the image and then wrote the poem - usually it's the other way round:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 6:57:00 AM
How pretty!! I think you could enter it as a Monoku in PD's contest.. It's so lovely!! :) :)
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:00:00 AM
Oh that's an idea:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2016 1:10:00 AM
Beautifully penned spring poem, so vivid I love it!
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thanks Brian:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2016 11:14:00 PM
What a pretty haiku. I love the form and you used it to great effect! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2016 9:38:00 PM
Now THIS has a GREAT last line, Jan. I really like this. For a contest???
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:04:00 AM
No just an impromptu write - i was finding a pic for the contest for Dan and found this and was inspired:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2016 9:02:00 PM
Jan, oh so pretty, just like a haiku is suppose to be, I am lovin this 7 !
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx