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Spring Forward

There once was a buff metal coil
whose gal was aluminum foil.
She was his sunshine.
He sprang for the wine,
all's swell 'till they run out of oil.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2015

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Elaine George Date: 3/3/2015 11:54:00 AM Very imaginative, Deb. lol.... Yes! I am still alive and kicking. Exremely busy these days with many projects on the go...not much time for the soup....but I'll be back. Think of you often and wishing you all the best in 2015. your friend, Elane Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/1/2015 9:00:00 AM Very original, Debbie! Like how he 'sprang' for the wine! Full marks !! // paul Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 2/22/2015 7:32:00 PM Funny, funny, funny...this deserves two boings!(which is a good thing, starting now) Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/19/2015 6:46:00 AM Debbie, a fun one, great example for me to try your contest, time for me to lighten up after my recent write oh the tears and thanks for the suggestion of that site to publish my poetry, yes melancholy is me for sure and thank you for your kind comment also, so appreciated, my muse is on fire Debbie, my soul is pouring out the emotions and words and I am unable to stop the flow ~~ Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/17/2015 4:41:00 PM A cute limerick, Debbie! You are so clever...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 2/17/2015 10:31:00 AM Oooohhhhhh...that's rough... A good one! Login to Reply

Cona Adams Date: 2/17/2015 10:11:00 AM I love limericks, Debbie. Thanks for the belly laugh. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/17/2015 7:29:00 AM Cute one..Great play on words and ideas..I enjoyed the chuckle this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Julia Ward Date: 2/17/2015 7:24:00 AM Very good. You know, I have replied to all of your comments on my poems, but Soup hasn't notified you. I have commented on some of yours too. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2015 5:07:00 AM - A great suggestion for your contest,Debbie ! - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 2/17/2015 2:01:00 AM very amusing write good luck in contest Login to Reply

Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 2/17/2015 12:01:00 AM clever and amusing..... especially liked the second line: "whose gal was aluminum foil" Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/16/2015 11:44:00 PM Debbie, this seems to be the model for your contest. will try to write one. Mohan Login to Reply

Janet Eaton Date: 2/16/2015 8:08:00 PM LOL Love this Debbie, Good luck in the contest, a winner for sure. ##7## Janet Login to Reply Janet Eaton Date: 2/17/2015 6:05:00 AM lol I did not even think of that. Still a great limerick. Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/16/2015 10:18:00 PM naww it's my contest!!

Lindsay Laurie Date: 2/16/2015 7:53:00 PM G'day Debbie... Very very good. Thanks for the giggle Debbie. Regards - Lindsay Login to Reply