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Spring Forward

There once was a buff metal coil
whose gal was aluminum foil.
She was his sunshine.
He sprang for the wine,
all's swell 'till they run out of oil.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2015

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March 3, 2015 at 11:54 AM

Very imaginative, Deb. lol.... Yes! I am still alive and kicking. Exremely busy these days with many projects on the go...not much time for the soup....but I'll be back. Think of you often and wishing you all the best in 2015. your friend, Elane

March 1, 2015 at 9:00 AM

Very original, Debbie! Like how he 'sprang' for the wine! Full marks !! // paul

February 22, 2015 at 7:32 PM

Funny, funny, funny...this deserves two boings!(which is a good thing, starting now)

Constance La France

February 19, 2015 at 6:46 AM

Debbie, a fun one, great example for me to try your contest, time for me to lighten up after my recent write oh the tears and thanks for the suggestion of that site to publish my poetry, yes melancholy is me for sure and thank you for your kind comment also, so appreciated, my muse is on fire Debbie, my soul is pouring out the emotions and words and I am unable to stop the flow ~~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 17, 2015 at 4:41 PM

A cute limerick, Debbie! You are so clever...hugs, Rhonda

February 17, 2015 at 10:31 AM

Oooohhhhhh...that's rough... A good one!

February 17, 2015 at 10:11 AM

I love limericks, Debbie. Thanks for the belly laugh.

February 17, 2015 at 7:29 AM

Cute one..Great play on words and ideas..I enjoyed the chuckle this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

February 17, 2015 at 7:24 AM

Very good. You know, I have replied to all of your comments on my poems, but Soup hasn't notified you. I have commented on some of yours too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 17, 2015 at 5:07 AM

- A great suggestion for your contest,Debbie ! - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 17, 2015 at 2:01 AM

very amusing write good luck in contest

Victoria Anderson-Throop

February 17, 2015 at 12:01 AM

clever and amusing..... especially liked the second line: "whose gal was aluminum foil"

February 16, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Debbie, this seems to be the model for your contest. will try to write one. Mohan

February 16, 2015 at 8:08 PM

LOL Love this Debbie, Good luck in the contest, a winner for sure. ##7## Janet

February 17, 2015 at 6:05 AM

lol I did not even think of that. Still a great limerick.

February 16, 2015 at 10:18 PM

naww it's my contest!!

February 16, 2015 at 7:53 PM

G'day Debbie... Very very good. Thanks for the giggle Debbie. Regards - Lindsay

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