Sally Eslinger Poet Rhyme

Spring Enchantment a love poem

Spring Enchantment (a love poem)


As wisps of clouds creeped
overhead before a storm moving quickly east,
the moon lay down his vanilla beams 
to dispel the darkness hiding our bared feet — 
set side by side — romantically
touching for warmth, for love, for eternity,
hopefully, to envelop us, like the coming rain
in our lives’ thundering, combined heartbeats
…joined into those duets passion will release
all about from the great springs of yearning.



(c) s.y. Eslinger 3/2024
Thanks be to God——

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Saleh Ben Saleh May 16, 2024 at 12:00 AM Beautifully expressed well done and congratulations.

Mike Bayles May 12, 2024 at 8:18 PM Very nice, Sally.

Duke Beaufort May 1, 2024 at 8:45 AM Sally, this is great...you have a very optimistic and charming view/style on human relationships. I will try to come back and read more of your work when I have some time. It's very pleasant to see what you write since it is unique and fun.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2024 at 4:26 PM Hello Sally, congratulations on your POTW. Also my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Joseph P. DiMino April 7, 2024 at 7:59 PM "set side by side — romantically touching for warmth, for love, for eternity," Very beautiful, Sally. POTW well deserved.

Michelle Faulkner April 5, 2024 at 3:20 PM A beautiful and stunning serenade to the steady fortress of your enduring love, knowing of your recent health challenges this must be a great comfort to you-

Victor Buhagiar April 5, 2024 at 1:53 AM Congrats for your mention as the best. Because it is indeed beautiful to read. A great romantic poem.

Unseeking Seeker April 4, 2024 at 9:34 PM A truly sublime poem ~ warmest congratulations on POTW, Sally dear

Sally Eslinger April 4, 2024 at 6:37 AM OMG, my thanks for this honor and to my beloved brother & sister poets for all the wonderful comments!

Sam Scott April 3, 2024 at 7:42 PM This is quite lovely, Sally :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 3, 2024 at 5:14 PM Beautiful romantic poem, Dear Poet. Images as - "the moon lay down his vanilla beams to dispel the darkness hiding our bared feet" are stunning! Congratulations on POTW.

Jan Allison April 1, 2024 at 3:51 PM how lovely and romantic Sally, many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2024 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on POTW!

Beryl Edmonds April 1, 2024 at 2:10 AM Beautiful and romantic Sally, congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl

Bill Baker March 31, 2024 at 11:31 PM Back to congratulate you on your POTW, Sally! Enjoy your special week of recognition, my kind friend. Awesome poetry! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Brandy Nicole March 31, 2024 at 4:32 PM ' the moon lay down his vanilla beams, set side by side — romantically. ' Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts are dreamy, romantic and magical. Congratulations Sally, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith March 31, 2024 at 8:47 AM Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your romantic/beautiful write. "Happy Easter" Have a blessed day.....................

Linda Alice Fowler March 31, 2024 at 7:18 AM A beautiful and romantic love poem dear Sally. Congratulations on the POTW honor! :)

Tania Kitchin March 31, 2024 at 5:32 AM Sally, a wonderful romantic poem, congratulations on POTW.

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 31, 2024 at 5:14 AM Dear Sally, I am so happy for you, getting the POTW! So well deserved for such a wonderful poem! - Blessings, Daniel

Tom Cunningham March 31, 2024 at 1:11 AM Congratulations to you Sally on your romantic verse being POTW. Tom

Bill Baker March 30, 2024 at 3:57 PM I like your romantic and passionate love poet, Sally. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Hugs, Bill

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2024 at 5:50 AM Wonderfully romantic--a poem filled with passion, Sally. --romantically touching for warmth, for love, for eternity---much enjoyed the tender voice of your poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 29, 2024 at 4:50 AM Dear Sally, is a breathtaking ode to love and nature's beauty. The imagery of wisps of clouds, the moon's vanilla beams, and the impending storm sets a scene of intimacy and anticipation. I love how your words capture the essence of love's warmth and hope for eternity with such tender elegance. Your poem stirs emotions of passion and longing. It's a masterpiece that envelops the reader in the enchantment of spring and the magic of love's embrace. - Blessings, Daniel

Ink Empress March 29, 2024 at 4:33 AM Dear sally, this is absolutely stunning and so well crafted! I love the flow of your imagery and how descriptive it is, i see your use of vanilla too, and the moon imagery truly enhances the romantic ambience of the poem. You always leave me in awe of your words! And this is no exception! A fave it is! I love it

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