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Spring Delight Promise

I'm a flower; I stand tall and primp for the world to see, As a blooming princess, I incur both acclaim and glory. Shaking shyly under a whimsical sky in dull tree stumps,  Soft melting snow vacuums up my tumescent clumps. Eastward, where the eagle's feathers spread for flight, Glow magnifies, bidding farewell to the fading twilight. Once the days lengthen, they grow rosier and warmer, Wintry endless dullness for my darling little charmer. Paving the way for brighter days and lifting the spirit, Vivid illumination, glowing embers, ruby, and pure merit. Vibe shone in dual heat, a starry sky coated in sublime, As stirring winds sate the slight cold, of ululating time.  Awe-inspiring bliss at the first arrival of spring thrill, The morphology of the blooms on the saffron daffodil Ritzily jasmine, eerie whispers ripple across the woods, Spring, my lover, spills my soul in its pacific moods. Fields of color bloom with bright joy, in ribald delight. Narcissus competes with tulips for greater height.
1st place contest winner Written: February 19, 2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May
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Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:56 AM
A charming poem, Lasaad, and so colorful and bright--chasing gloomy winter out the door! Congratulations!
May Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Very nicely done Sotto, Congrats on your win
Kauffman Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Love your "primping flower" - a little vanity with a touch of joyful celebration as the daffodil and the narcissus compete to see who can be the tallest! So charming and full of the zest of spring, Lasaad! Many congratulations for your win dear friend. Blessings on your garden.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:30 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Spring will soon be here bringing all the pretty flowers. Have a blessed day...............
George Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win dear friend .... ! I anticipated that this poem would be at the top.
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Nice one Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
Scorpio Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:48 PM
How can I personally not love this piece personification and couplets! Beautiful well written extremely engaging descriptions. I am always pleased when I stop by your page today was no exception! Blessings my friend A.S.
Kulkarni Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Such a splendid, colorful poetry you brought for us Scott, just like delightful Spring!!
George Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:34 AM
"Ritzily jasmine, eerie whispers ripple across the woods, Spring, my lover, spills my soul in its pacific moods." An amazing beauty you have carved out. An extremely lovely poem capable of giving such sensory delight . A sure winner, I can bet!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 12:41 PM
A lovely write/picture. Spring will be here soon with many flowers. Have a fun day..................
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:05 AM
Delightful vibes of spring you convey my friend. Great images. Best to you, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 1:14 AM
The title says it all.
Horsman Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 12:47 AM
A sure sign, spring is arriving, standing tall and proud, just like your, Lasaad.
Nuwas Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:56 PM
A wonderful poem to read :)
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