Spring Delight Promise

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I'm a flower; I stand tall and primp for the world to see, As a blooming princess, I incur both acclaim and glory. Shaking shyly under a whimsical sky in dull tree stumps,  Soft melting snow vacuums up my tumescent clumps. Eastward, where the eagle's feathers spread for flight, Glow magnifies, bidding farewell to the fading twilight. Once the days lengthen, they grow rosier and warmer, Wintry endless dullness for my darling little charmer. Paving the way for brighter days and lifting the spirit, Vivid illumination, glowing embers, ruby, and pure merit. Vibe shone in dual heat, a starry sky coated in sublime, As stirring winds sate the slight cold, of ululating time.  Awe-inspiring bliss at the first arrival of spring thrill, The morphology of the blooms on the saffron daffodil Ritzily jasmine, eerie whispers ripple across the woods, Spring, my lover, spills my soul in its pacific moods. Fields of color bloom with bright joy, in ribald delight. Narcissus competes with tulips for greater height.
1st place contest winner Written: February 19, 2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 3/10/2023 8:56:00 AM
A charming poem, Lasaad, and so colorful and bright--chasing gloomy winter out the door! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:25:00 PM
Very nicely done Sotto, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:27:00 PM
Love your "primping flower" - a little vanity with a touch of joyful celebration as the daffodil and the narcissus compete to see who can be the tallest! So charming and full of the zest of spring, Lasaad! Many congratulations for your win dear friend. Blessings on your garden.
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:30:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Spring will soon be here bringing all the pretty flowers. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/6/2023 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win dear friend .... ! I anticipated that this poem would be at the top.
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:38:00 PM
Nice one Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/26/2023 12:48:00 PM
How can I personally not love this piece personification and couplets! Beautiful well written extremely engaging descriptions. I am always pleased when I stop by your page today was no exception! Blessings my friend A.S.
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:56:00 PM
Such a splendid, colorful poetry you brought for us Scott, just like delightful Spring!!
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:34:00 AM
"Ritzily jasmine, eerie whispers ripple across the woods, Spring, my lover, spills my soul in its pacific moods." An amazing beauty you have carved out. An extremely lovely poem capable of giving such sensory delight . A sure winner, I can bet!
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Date: 2/20/2023 12:41:00 PM
A lovely write/picture. Spring will be here soon with many flowers. Have a fun day..................
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Date: 2/20/2023 9:05:00 AM
Delightful vibes of spring you convey my friend. Great images. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/20/2023 1:14:00 AM
The title says it all.
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Date: 2/20/2023 12:47:00 AM
A sure sign, spring is arriving, standing tall and proud, just like your, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:56:00 PM
A wonderful poem to read :)
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