Michelle Faulkner Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Spring Clings

Splendiferous skies
Sunflower sunrise
haystacks of lilacs
pastel daisies play
with robins and jays

fragrant grass finds
bunny behinds
cotton lambs coo
earth's lush rebirth

a spring dream
until my
face hits a

clinging
bug filled

web

3/09/21

Poem of the Day
3/11/21

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Mystic Rose Rose August 1, 2021 at 3:38 PM Yicks, !!

Sara Kendrick May 30, 2021 at 4:13 PM Those webs are no fun at all. Very descriptive work. I have enjoyed reading these in the past but haven't written one in quite some time. I will have to try my hand at them again soon. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 5, 2021 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your on. A wonderful spring write. Please, no bug filled webs. Have a blessed day/week..........

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2021 at 9:11 AM Those spider webs are awful aren't they. Enjoyed reading your creative work that has been featured for POTD. Congrats on this excellent winner. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Line Gauthier March 30, 2021 at 12:57 PM lovely, Michelle. Congrats on your POTD ~

Caren Krutsinger March 23, 2021 at 12:09 PM Wonderfully done! Congrats on POTD with this terrific diminished hex.

Jennifer Proxenos March 20, 2021 at 6:23 AM Hi Michelle, Back in circulation have had 2 nightmare weeks - my husband had a major operation and then strict recuperation was imperative - still not completely well but thank God he is on the mend. An awesome poem, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Smita Kulkarni March 18, 2021 at 1:36 PM Very cute!!! Loved it!

Robert Pettit March 14, 2021 at 9:10 PM I can just imagine seeing the fly with the human head stuck in the web and crying "help me". Great write. Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:42 PM And the spider's thinking 'Look at the size of that bug!' Thanks for the fun comment, Robert~

Gershon Wolf March 14, 2021 at 8:25 AM How did I miss this wonderful write as POTD?! I must be going blind or something. I think that the way you 'diminished the hexaverse' magnifies exponentially the impact of this poem! Congrats, Michelle! :) gw Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:43 PM It is a fun form to write, thanks for your return visit, gw :)

Harry Horsman March 13, 2021 at 8:26 PM I dont like spiders either, but love your poetry, this is a gem. Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:44 PM You are too kind, and I am a big fan of yours too, thanks harry :)

Alexis Y. March 13, 2021 at 5:54 PM Lol! Michelle, What a splendid “fun” spring write read on today. Got to watch those webs! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day evening:-) Alexis Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:44 PM Yes, spring has more than birds and bunnies!

J. Summers March 12, 2021 at 4:09 PM Good form and I like the humor at the end. Congratulations on receiving POTD. John Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:45 PM Hi John, thank you for the comment, appreciate it~

Akkina Downing March 12, 2021 at 5:39 AM Hi Michelle, beautiful poem and congratulations on potd... Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:48 PM Thank you, Akkina~

Regina Mcintosh March 11, 2021 at 7:15 PM Love this... stunning. I love love love it. Congrats on POTD and God bless you. Love, Gina Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:48 PM Thank you very much, Gina!

Brandy Nicole March 11, 2021 at 6:32 PM "bunny behinds and cotton lambs coo" I am smiling and giggling at the same time. :) Everything is peachy, until you slam into that sticky spider web. Yuck ! I know many of us can relate. Congratulations Michelle, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:47 PM You gotta watch out for those webs - thanks for your comment, Brandy~

Jennifer Fenn March 11, 2021 at 4:07 PM Hi Michelle! This is beautiful and funny at the same time! Congrats on POTD! Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:46 PM Thank you kindly, Jennifer~

Edward Ibeh March 11, 2021 at 3:09 PM Amazing dim hex, Michelle:-) Heartiest congratulations on POTD! Michelle Faulkner March 16, 2021 at 7:45 PM Thank you very much, Edward~

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 1:19 PM Congratulations on poem of the day, Michelle love the last three lines. Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 9:04 PM I thought it would be fun to showcase another side of spring, thank you, Eve!

Tania Kitchin March 11, 2021 at 12:31 PM Michelle, congratulations on POTD, a fun Spring poem! Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 8:59 PM Glad you like it, thank you, Tania.

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 11:21 AM dropping back with my congrats on POTD Michelle:-) hugs jan xx Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 8:58 PM Glad as always to see you, jan, hugs back :)

Warren Doll March 11, 2021 at 10:03 AM Wonderful spring poem. Congratulations on POTD, Michelle. All the best~ Warren Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 8:57 PM Appreciate it, thank you, Warren~

John Lawless March 11, 2021 at 9:24 AM Ah yes, Michelle, nothing can so completely overcome a moment like a web in the face.....maybe a spider in the bath tub.... Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 1:38 PM I confess, I make my hubby squish all the spiders - thanks for commenting, John!

David Kavanagh March 11, 2021 at 8:58 AM A fine write Michelle, love your ending, splendiferous indeed, and well deserving potd, cheers David Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 1:37 PM Thanks for your splendiferous comment, David :)

Ken Rone March 11, 2021 at 8:00 AM I was dancing to your beautiful rhythm until "... my face hits a clinging bug filled web". Great POTD win! Michelle Faulkner March 11, 2021 at 1:35 PM Spring has its sticky side too, thanks for your great comment, Ken~

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