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Spring Clings

Splendiferous skies
Sunflower sunrise
haystacks of lilacs
pastel daisies play
with robins and jays

fragrant grass finds
bunny behinds
cotton lambs coo
earth's lush rebirth

a spring dream
until my
face hits a

clinging
bug filled

web

3/09/21

Poem of the Day
3/11/21

Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2021

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Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/1/2021 3:38:00 PM Yicks, !! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/30/2021 4:13:00 PM Those webs are no fun at all. Very descriptive work. I have enjoyed reading these in the past but haven't written one in quite some time. I will have to try my hand at them again soon. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/5/2021 8:42:00 AM Congratulations on your on. A wonderful spring write. Please, no bug filled webs. Have a blessed day/week.......... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/2/2021 9:11:00 AM Those spider webs are awful aren't they. Enjoyed reading your creative work that has been featured for POTD. Congrats on this excellent winner. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 3/30/2021 12:57:00 PM lovely, Michelle. Congrats on your POTD ~ Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/23/2021 12:09:00 PM Wonderfully done! Congrats on POTD with this terrific diminished hex. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/20/2021 6:23:00 AM Hi Michelle, Back in circulation have had 2 nightmare weeks - my husband had a major operation and then strict recuperation was imperative - still not completely well but thank God he is on the mend. An awesome poem, blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Smita Kulkarni Date: 3/18/2021 1:36:00 PM Very cute!!! Loved it! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 3/14/2021 9:10:00 PM I can just imagine seeing the fly with the human head stuck in the web and crying "help me". Great write. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:42:00 PM And the spider's thinking 'Look at the size of that bug!' Thanks for the fun comment, Robert~

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/14/2021 8:25:00 AM How did I miss this wonderful write as POTD?! I must be going blind or something. I think that the way you 'diminished the hexaverse' magnifies exponentially the impact of this poem! Congrats, Michelle! :) gw Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:43:00 PM It is a fun form to write, thanks for your return visit, gw :)

Harry Horsman Date: 3/13/2021 8:26:00 PM I dont like spiders either, but love your poetry, this is a gem. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:44:00 PM You are too kind, and I am a big fan of yours too, thanks harry :)

Alexis Y. Date: 3/13/2021 5:54:00 PM Lol! Michelle, What a splendid “fun” spring write read on today. Got to watch those webs! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day evening:-) Alexis Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:44:00 PM Yes, spring has more than birds and bunnies!

J. Summers Date: 3/12/2021 4:09:00 PM Good form and I like the humor at the end. Congratulations on receiving POTD. John Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:45:00 PM Hi John, thank you for the comment, appreciate it~

Akkina Downing Date: 3/12/2021 5:39:00 AM Hi Michelle, beautiful poem and congratulations on potd... Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:48:00 PM Thank you, Akkina~

Regina Mcintosh Date: 3/11/2021 7:15:00 PM Love this... stunning. I love love love it. Congrats on POTD and God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:48:00 PM Thank you very much, Gina!

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/11/2021 6:32:00 PM "bunny behinds and cotton lambs coo" I am smiling and giggling at the same time. :) Everything is peachy, until you slam into that sticky spider web. Yuck ! I know many of us can relate. Congratulations Michelle, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:47:00 PM You gotta watch out for those webs - thanks for your comment, Brandy~

Jennifer Fenn Date: 3/11/2021 4:07:00 PM Hi Michelle! This is beautiful and funny at the same time! Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:46:00 PM Thank you kindly, Jennifer~

Edward Ibeh Date: 3/11/2021 3:09:00 PM Amazing dim hex, Michelle:-) Heartiest congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/16/2021 7:45:00 PM Thank you very much, Edward~

Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2021 1:19:00 PM Congratulations on poem of the day, Michelle love the last three lines. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 9:04:00 PM I thought it would be fun to showcase another side of spring, thank you, Eve!

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/11/2021 12:31:00 PM Michelle, congratulations on POTD, a fun Spring poem! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 8:59:00 PM Glad you like it, thank you, Tania.

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2021 11:21:00 AM dropping back with my congrats on POTD Michelle:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 8:58:00 PM Glad as always to see you, jan, hugs back :)

Warren Doll Date: 3/11/2021 10:03:00 AM Wonderful spring poem. Congratulations on POTD, Michelle. All the best~ Warren Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 8:57:00 PM Appreciate it, thank you, Warren~

John Lawless Date: 3/11/2021 9:24:00 AM Ah yes, Michelle, nothing can so completely overcome a moment like a web in the face.....maybe a spider in the bath tub.... Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 1:38:00 PM I confess, I make my hubby squish all the spiders - thanks for commenting, John!

David Kavanagh Date: 3/11/2021 8:58:00 AM A fine write Michelle, love your ending, splendiferous indeed, and well deserving potd, cheers David Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 1:37:00 PM Thanks for your splendiferous comment, David :)

Ken Rone Date: 3/11/2021 8:00:00 AM I was dancing to your beautiful rhythm until "... my face hits a clinging bug filled web". Great POTD win! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2021 1:35:00 PM Spring has its sticky side too, thanks for your great comment, Ken~

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