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Spring Break-Ers

dock appendages spring break at the beach human barnacles

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 3:52:00 PM

Daytona Beach... but, I want myself a Dodge Daytona... love the senryu... glad this break is over...xox~PD

Richard Ferry

Date: 3/12/2013 3:58:00 PM

good image rick

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/10/2013 7:31:00 AM

Metaphorically spring break written. Oh how true. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2013 11:08:00 AM

what a GREAT way to describe it. Love your metaphor.

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/9/2013 7:54:00 AM

An apt description I'm sure ... "human barnacles "..Now that brings serious images to mind. Enjoyed your senryu.

Judy Konos

Date: 3/9/2013 6:33:00 AM

Good One...THANKS