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Crocus bow your heads As you rise from beds From your sleep beneath the ground. Tulips where are you? Please don't leave me blue, Sunny daffodils abound! I am seeking spring Seen in everything As cold winter melts away. Trees soon come alive, Little buds survive And they bloom in bright display. Then with sweet surprise Beauty fills my eyes And I hear the robins sing. Flowers love the rain Tapping at my pane As I thank the Lord for spring. May 3, 2017 (rev) The Alouette The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules: Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7 Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b The form name is a French word meaning 'skylark' or larks that fly high, the association to the lark's song being appropriate for the musical quality of this form. The word 'alouette' can also mean a children's song (usually sung in a group), and although this poetry form is not necessarily for children's poetry (but can be applied that way), it is reminiscent of that style of short lines. Preference for the meter accent is on the third syllable of each line (please see examples below).

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Date: 3/22/2015 7:08:00 AM
This was a joy to read filled with all the beauty and anticipation of spring.
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:14:00 AM
What a gorgeous spring this is. Soothing to the ears. I love it.
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Date: 3/18/2015 5:49:00 PM
The sharpness of colours in the image match the imagery your words paint Connie. Kaleidoscopic beauty is this poetry, hugs//James :)
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Date: 3/18/2015 2:59:00 AM
G'day Connie... a beaut image of spring with all its colour and warmth and welcoming from the song of birds, and here we are sliding into autumn colours and fruit bounties. Two best times of the year. Thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/6/2016 11:14:00 PM
I never got the chance to thank you for this lovely comment Lindsay. I love both spring and autum down under. I spent three days a week in Sydney for two solid years and I miss it so.Thank you! Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 3/17/2015 5:02:00 PM
Connie, beautiful pic and beautiful words to create a wonderful poem, I just love it, makes me want spring but it is freezing in my part of Canada and thanks for visiting o the pain and leaving your comforting comment . . .
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/17/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance. I hope you are having a lovely St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte , (to Health) Connie
Date: 3/17/2015 10:55:00 AM
As refreshing as a spring rain with its promise of renewal. You know how to create a smile with your magic words and you do it well. Emile.
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Emile. Your comments are always so nice and thoughtful. Happy Saint Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/17/2015 3:56:00 AM
Excellent. Very refreshing write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:43:00 PM
Ravi, Thank you very much. I appreciate your generous comment. I hope you are having a lovely St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/17/2015 1:27:00 AM
I hear the robins, smell the flowers, feel the gentle rain...beautiful imagery, Connie...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thank you very much for your sweet comments Rhonda. I hope you are having a super St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 11:38:00 PM
I love the rhymescheme Connie and rich with imagery....hugs Tim
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Time. I wish you a wonderful St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 8:48:00 PM
I saw and heard the Robin this morning . . . your words painted a beautiful spring day of colors, sounds, and sweet scents . . . lovely praise indeed! 7
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:46:00 PM
Why thank you very much David. I am very happy spring is here for many who were trapped by snow. I wish you a very Happy St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 8:35:00 PM
It's great how you feature the different forms found at Poetry soup. how I wish Marie would put my form up over there. But maybe it's not to be. Love your poem. Was it for that one spring contest? (forget the name of it now)
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:48:00 PM
No Andrea, I must have missed that contest. This was just to celebrate spring. I hope you had a Great St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 8:34:00 PM
that picture is so awesomely bright and springy!! Let me see the poem that goes with it now!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:21:00 PM
The NYC winter is almost over. This year it was a rough one. I hope spring this year will be as nice as you make it sound in your work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:50:00 PM
I hear there is more snow making its last hoorah! Best of luck with that and the melt. I hope you enjoyed St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 8:01:00 PM
Very nicely done...love the picture you presented.
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thank you very much John. I borrowed it from the Web. Flowers always cheer. I hope you had a lovely St. Patrick's Day! Sláinte, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful write to go with the beautiful picture....best wishes....hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/16/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. I am thankful spring is here for all those who have been snowbound. Blessings, Connie
Date: 3/16/2015 6:34:00 PM
delightful delightful delightful - I love this beautiful Spring poem - a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2015 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I wrote it during the east coast snow storms but didn't want to post it until there was hope of spring. hugs, Connie

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