Spring Dh

Spring has sprung at last Lambs gambolling free New shoots fresh and green Bulbs give birth to blooms Daffs in all my rooms My spirit soars From winters gloom Sun permeates In every room Skies of blue Lots to do Dreams anew See friends Find peace Spring Written: 29th March 2019 Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Contest About Spring Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger 2nd place Contest May 2019 Premier 1 Sponsor Brian Strand

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2019 10:59:00 AM

Frothing with joy! Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/3/2019 6:57:00 PM

Lovely comment Kim, many thanks and kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/2/2019 10:06:00 PM

"sun permeates in every room" Joy shining in each stanza :) Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/3/2019 6:55:00 PM

Oh wow, I love your comment PS, many thanks and kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2019 7:38:00 PM

very spring-y!!! Love it and congrats for your win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/3/2019 6:52:00 PM

Haha, I love spring-y and so glad you love it too Andrea, for it always means a lot to me each time you visit - thanks! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/2/2019 7:20:00 PM

Very deft weaving of rhymes within your touching ode to spring, congratulations, Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/3/2019 6:50:00 PM

Many thanks Michelle for your lovely comments and congrats, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 1:13:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Ann - I look forward to seeing the lambs ... they are so cute :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/1/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your kind comments and I hope you see some lambs very soon. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/30/2019 1:59:00 PM

A BLESSED ROUTINE!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/31/2019 2:22:00 AM

Many thanks Ralph for your lovely comment and how nice to meet you! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/29/2019 4:34:00 AM

Festive verses heralding artfully Spring's arrival. Excellent dear Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/29/2019 5:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios for your lovely comment. Spring is my most favourite time of the year and it always lifts my spirit after the grey dark winter months have taken their toll! I feel renewed and ready to take on whatever comes my way, though hopefully it will be gentle as I am not getting any younger, Haha. With kindest thoughts Ann xx