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Spring

Nature's wake from sleep Life flirts with beauty a time for flowers to flaunt

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Date: 3/6/2020 8:48:00 AM
Love it!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Valerie
Date: 3/1/2019 11:23:00 AM
So where have you been lately. I am being tormented by Trump. Wonder what impressions are of him outside America.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:57:00 AM
hahahahaha.. I have been around, but moving from place to place.. First Nigeria, then Germany, then back o Nigeria and now in the UK.. Trump is unpopular in Europe, but not the case in Nigeria. The Christians there love him so much, even despite the travel ban on the country
Date: 1/25/2019 8:38:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 2/16/2016 8:21:00 PM
Bravo. Interesting line shift and like others love the last line.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Dave Will
Date: 2/16/2016 2:42:00 PM
Of course this is gem you've penned.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Iris Elizabeth
Date: 2/16/2016 9:57:00 AM
I love '...a time for flowers to flaunt,' this phrase is the definition of Spring! A wonderful HAIKU! Best wishes, Keith
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Keith
Date: 2/6/2016 7:31:00 AM
Awe, So kind of you. You to are welcome to stop by my poems and leaves your voice anytime... HUGS
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM
hahahaha... I guess, I've been doing that of late, Linda. Once again, thank you so much
Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM
thank you for the nice reply
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:29:00 AM
you are always welcome my dear
Date: 2/6/2016 3:59:00 AM
"This haiku made me smile. Both your write and the subject enchants! Congratulations on your poem being featured as POTD!"
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim Nunez
Date: 2/6/2016 1:10:00 AM
Good work Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Curtis
Date: 2/5/2016 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day! What a lovely haiku! :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Chantelle
Date: 2/5/2016 4:01:00 PM
Sweet and simple. Congrats on POTD.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeannie
Date: 2/5/2016 3:55:00 PM
Congrats on p.o.t.d.!
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hi Funom, congratulations on Poem Of The Day, much deserved my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much the second time Vladislav
Date: 2/5/2016 1:47:00 PM
Excellent haiku. Congrats on POTD my lovely friend,bl
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Devnath
Date: 2/5/2016 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful words of hope as we await Spring, Funom. Congratulations on your poem honored as Poem of the Day! Sandra
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra
Date: 2/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Funom - Today : P.O.T.D. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne
Date: 2/4/2016 8:09:00 PM
The first signs of spring are always a welcome sight after a long, cold winter... This is a lovely haiku. I enjoyed it very much! Nicely written, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Deschler
Date: 2/4/2016 8:47:00 AM
Hi Funom, this Haiku awakens my thoughts of spring, they burst forth like the first blooms of Springs touch my friend. Your words paint the vision before my eyes. A seven and a fave for this one....Vladislav.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Vladislav
Date: 2/4/2016 4:28:00 AM
A truly lovely Haiku, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Elaine
Date: 2/3/2016 9:04:00 PM
I adore that middle line, Funom. Life flirts with beauty. So cute.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Date: 2/3/2016 7:46:00 PM
enjoyed your haiku Funom:) @-> LINDA <-@
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 2/3/2016 12:17:00 PM
I see that the daffodils are showing their green now and it won'd be long before that beauty that I enjoy will start to happen..This is a very descriptive of the season ahead..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 2/3/2016 10:20:00 AM
very well conveyed with a good 'aha' moment, funom..huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much nette
Date: 2/3/2016 9:28:00 AM
So nice! Enjoyed...BG
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Barbara
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