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Spring

Nature's wake from sleep
Life flirts with beauty
a time for flowers to flaunt

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Valerie Staton

Date: 3/6/2020 8:48:00 AM

Love it!

Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Valerie

James Horn

Date: 3/1/2019 11:23:00 AM

So where have you been lately. I am being tormented by Trump. Wonder what impressions are of him outside America.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:57:00 AM

hahahahaha.. I have been around, but moving from place to place.. First Nigeria, then Germany, then back o Nigeria and now in the UK.. Trump is unpopular in Europe, but not the case in Nigeria. The Christians there love him so much, even despite the travel ban on the country

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:38:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2020 10:58:00 AM

Thank you so much

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 2/16/2016 8:21:00 PM

Bravo. Interesting line shift and like others love the last line.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Dave Will

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 2/16/2016 2:42:00 PM

Of course this is gem you've penned.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Iris Elizabeth

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/16/2016 9:57:00 AM

I love '...a time for flowers to flaunt,' this phrase is the definition of Spring! A wonderful HAIKU! Best wishes, Keith

Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Keith

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 7:31:00 AM

Awe, So kind of you. You to are welcome to stop by my poems and leaves your voice anytime... HUGS

Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM

hahahaha... I guess, I've been doing that of late, Linda. Once again, thank you so much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM

thank you for the nice reply

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:29:00 AM

you are always welcome my dear

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/6/2016 3:59:00 AM

"This haiku made me smile. Both your write and the subject enchants! Congratulations on your poem being featured as POTD!"

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim Nunez

Curtis Johnson

Date: 2/6/2016 1:10:00 AM

Good work Funom

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Curtis

Marilyn Williams

Date: 2/5/2016 4:01:00 PM

Sweet and simple. Congrats on POTD.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeannie

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/5/2016 3:55:00 PM

Congrats on p.o.t.d.!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/5/2016 2:48:00 PM

Hi Funom, congratulations on Poem Of The Day, much deserved my friend.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:26:00 AM

Thank you so much the second time Vladislav

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/5/2016 1:47:00 PM

Excellent haiku. Congrats on POTD my lovely friend,bl

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Devnath

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/5/2016 12:48:00 PM

Beautiful words of hope as we await Spring, Funom. Congratulations on your poem honored as Poem of the Day! Sandra

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2016 5:51:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Funom - Today : P.O.T.D. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/4/2016 8:09:00 PM

The first signs of spring are always a welcome sight after a long, cold winter... This is a lovely haiku. I enjoyed it very much! Nicely written, Funom!

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Deschler

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/4/2016 8:47:00 AM

Hi Funom, this Haiku awakens my thoughts of spring, they burst forth like the first blooms of Springs touch my friend. Your words paint the vision before my eyes. A seven and a fave for this one....Vladislav.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Vladislav

Elaine George

Date: 2/4/2016 4:28:00 AM

A truly lovely Haiku, Funom.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2016 9:04:00 PM

I adore that middle line, Funom. Life flirts with beauty. So cute.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 7:46:00 PM

enjoyed your haiku Funom:) @-> LINDA <-@

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2016 12:17:00 PM

I see that the daffodils are showing their green now and it won'd be long before that beauty that I enjoy will start to happen..This is a very descriptive of the season ahead..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara