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sakura twigs .. dressed in flora ~ sip musky rouge from the sighs of spring...

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Date: 5/13/2025 1:46:00 AM
- Beautiful written, Ink :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/13/2025 12:18:00 AM
Dear Empress, your masterful alliteration is visible even in a monoku. "sip musky rouge from the sighs of spring..." How poetic and how splendidly imaginative! A sure winner.
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:08:00 PM
Delightful!!
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:58:00 AM
Ahhh breathtakingly beautiful
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely Monoku "spring" write. Pretty Flower Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away...........
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Date: 5/12/2025 8:06:00 AM
I feel the soft breeze in your poem.
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/12/2025 8:56:00 AM
Awn thank you sweet hilda appreciate you always
Date: 5/12/2025 5:46:00 AM
I'm not much of a gardener but flowers certainly demonstrate the imaginative beauty of the One who created them. Sweet haiku.
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Date: 5/12/2025 9:20:00 AM
Oops sorry. Been seeing a lot of haiku lately lol
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/12/2025 9:05:00 AM
I dont like gardening but i love flowers, seeing them alive and blooming, thank you so much its a monoku.
Date: 5/12/2025 5:12:00 AM
Your lines set the stage for me to see your flora as a beautiful Geisha. Well chosen words for you Monoku, Ink.
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/12/2025 9:06:00 AM
Thats such a beautiful comment, i like to think of me as a chocolate geisha! Always appreciate your support linnersz
Date: 5/12/2025 3:15:00 AM
Superb Monoko that captures the perfume of spring fruit trees.
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Date: 5/12/2025 3:06:00 AM
Dear IE, this is such a beautiful write! The writing is incredible on its own, the picture is just cherry on top! Loved it! Brilliant! Best, Anne
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Date: 5/12/2025 2:32:00 AM
Cherry blossom is my favourite but I never knew it was also called sakura!!! I love this monoku - it conjures also an effortlessly beautiful lady sauntering down the street - best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/12/2025 1:52:00 AM
Oooo Sakura twigs… absolutely gorgeous!!! Dressed in fauna !! Mmmm stunning haiku papi
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:43:00 AM
Very nice.Besides the picture is beautiful.
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/12/2025 12:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Akham, appreciate your visit

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