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May- 12- 2025

Spring Monoku Poetry Cpntest

Sponsor- Jcb Brul

chill stills, spring turns the tide - blooms open, bees hum, birds warble and heart throbs

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 5/29/2025 10:49:00 PM

This is a wonderful, concise poem that perfectly captures the sensory and emotional awakening of spring! This poem is a lively and compact celebration of spring's invigorating arrival. Congratulations, Ma'am Valsa.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 9:59:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Monoku write again. Have a blessed day with your win................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:28:00 PM

…and heart throbs - nice touch! Congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:08:00 AM

The busy-ness of spring ~ charming

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:32:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:47:00 PM

All so nice. Congrats, Valsa.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2025 1:30:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 5/12/2025 12:16:00 PM

Nice spring Monoku with a pretty picture. I am taking couple of weeks off to do some basic engineering research. Will be back next week to write some poems. GL in contest.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/12/2025 11:26:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely Monoku write. What A Pretty Picture. Spring is a great time of the year. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away...........

Tom Woody

Date: 5/12/2025 5:57:00 AM

Beautiful photo and mono Valsa

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2025 4:54:00 AM

Ahh!! Spring has its wonderful vibes. It is one of my favorite seasons. Such a nice line. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/12/2025 3:12:00 AM

You captured Spring in the most delightful of ways, dear Valsa. Hope you are not in the danger zone.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/12/2025 12:50:00 AM

Thats a stunning picture and how beautiful is your spring monoku, dear valsa, your way with words is truly soul warming and so uplifting' i can feel the energy and aura of spring so vividly through your picturesque take! Im sure will be a top winner! Best wishes always! Sending you light always!