Spring

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In spring's sweet grip, when buds begin to bloom,
My spirit, in joy, like blooms, does unfurled,
The sun's fond touch dispels the winter's gloom,
Whispering secrets to the sunrise world.

In greenery, scented flowers swinging,
Serenity fills up my restless soul,
Breeze swings the fields, echoing, with singing,  
Uplifting my visions,  once still, now whole. 

Oh, how the birdsongs fill the deep blue sky,
With melodies which stir the depths within,
The echoes of melodies softly fly,
Gesturing bye to winter's icy spin.

So let us revel in this moment bright,
Holding the Spring deep in our souls' delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/5/2024 3:47:00 PM
Spring is definitely a time of beginnings. Your poem captures this rapture of anticipation in beautiful rhyme and flow.
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:24:00 AM
- I'm waiting for spring to come (we got a lot of snow yesterday) - A lovely poem, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 4/4/2024 6:02:00 PM
Nice spring sonnet, Jay, the imagery was excellent, my friend. Spring is my favorite time of year because of the hope it brings with new life. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 4/4/2024 5:28:00 PM
Dear Jay, what a beautiful celebration of renewal and hope. The imagery you've captured, the essence of the season was so vividly. I loved that amidst life's cycles, there's always the promise of new beginnings. Your words inspire me to embrace the joy and serenity that spring brings. What a heartfelt reflection. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/4/2024 12:43:00 PM
what an absolutely delightful springtime sonnet Jay! hugs Jan xx
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