Spring - Love Transformation

SPRING - LOVE    TRANSFORMATION



His river-bed flows in love-warmed lands
But when it’s shelled with loneliness frigid,  
(That isolation brings in empty  hands ), 
Then he feels  the pain of coldness rigid.

All too solid is the frozen shell of solitude.  
All too absent the emotion flow he needs
When heart returns to beating sinewed  
Life,  which warming water feeds.

Oh, let the spring come quick on winged heels:
Oh, let him  find an overflowing love
Until his empty bed once more feels
The penetrating  light from there above.

      Then the transformation’s seen  in him
      And soul’s replenished to the  very brim.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Written for Debbie Guzzi's  Contest 	"Transformation"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/22/2012 7:45:00 AM
i knew you will enetr , so i gave you that rare chance to win high, KC.. kidding!... a modern renaisance man you are!.. congrats from the heart!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:57:00 PM
Sidney, wonderful Sonnet. I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing and congrats on winning Debbie's contest............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest *Sidney*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:31:00 AM
nice one.. congrat on the win~ sashi
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:54:00 PM
good luck in contest i think you have a real winner here ~always p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:26:00 AM
Nice one Sydney should do well xx
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