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Spring - Love Transformation

SPRING - LOVE TRANSFORMATION His river-bed flows in love-warmed lands But when it’s shelled with loneliness frigid, (That isolation brings in empty hands ), Then he feels the pain of coldness rigid. All too solid is the frozen shell of solitude. All too absent the emotion flow he needs When heart returns to beating sinewed Life, which warming water feeds. Oh, let the spring come quick on winged heels: Oh, let him find an overflowing love Until his empty bed once more feels The penetrating light from there above. Then the transformation’s seen in him And soul’s replenished to the very brim. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Debbie Guzzi's Contest "Transformation"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 7:45:00 AM
i knew you will enetr , so i gave you that rare chance to win high, KC.. kidding!... a modern renaisance man you are!.. congrats from the heart!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:57:00 PM
Sidney, wonderful Sonnet. I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing and congrats on winning Debbie's contest............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest *Sidney*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:31:00 AM
nice one.. congrat on the win~ sashi
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:54:00 PM
good luck in contest i think you have a real winner here ~always p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:26:00 AM
Nice one Sydney should do well xx
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