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True story

Spotted Fawn and I

Spotted Fawn and I

I whispered quietly to you, just a foot away
"I am not here to harm you, just gathering
wild ramps on this limestone bluff" curled up
next to a beach tree, one eye peaking at me
near the ground, ears alert, you lay so peacefully
enrobed in golden fur with brilliant ivory spots!

I will never see you again, dear one, but I know
I will always remember your ebony eye looking
at me revealing the wonders of our universe, 
for that I am in your gratitude.

As I moved away, she gently lifted to spindly
legs & effortlessly hopped away, leaving me
alone on the bluff, tired, weak, a bit dizzy
from effort, filled with solitary silence, inner
peace I only feel after talking with animals
in the wild, knowing I belong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 12:48 AM
Your meeting of the spotted fawn is accidental, but your recollections of that chance meeting are so beautiful ! The poem is a delight, James!
Goff Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Thank you Valsa!
James Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 3:11 AM
A beautiful and precious moment James and one that will never be forgotten. I am honoured to live in an area where nature is all around me. Emilia : )
Goff Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you Emilia!
Gilmour Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 4:24 AM
Such a magical moment you have shared James. I always feel it is such a privilege to watch a wild animal in their natural environment and it fills my heart with joy, just as your beautiful poem has done - thank you! a FAV for sure. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Goff Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Thx Ann!
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 6:37 PM
I am happy I was led to this poem. It is such a special moment captured vividly and written about superbly :) Thanks for sharing!
Raven Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Hi James, this is such a touching piece of poetry. I loved the content of this piece, it touched my heart and I felt peace. I was in the heart of this piece, I saw all so clearly, what wonderful imagery to behold. Your heart told this tale my friend. I felt such peace reading this wonderful write. May your pen ever run gold. has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike.
Goff Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Thanks again Mike!
Rose  Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Your heart seems to be in tune with God's creatures. That is a true sign of a man with a tender awakened soul. Thank you for sharing your poetry .
Goff Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Thank you PD...james
Esquire Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Dear Chef James, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A fellow POET that talks to nature's Lives. Superb Quill. A few years ago There was an Albino Deer born in my backyard (forest) behind the cabin. Great to read YOU again. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG SOUPMAIL
Goff Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM
My God Chef! So good to hear from you! made homemade Chicken Cashew Chow Mein last nite for visiting inlaws from a small Mississipi Rivertown in Southern Minnesota...wow! Chinese 5-Spice, rice-vinegar & Oyster Sauce, Bobs-Yer-Uncle! All my love, jimbo
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May 31, 2018 at 6:30 AM
I like this one. Deer are pretty and the fawns precious but they carry the deadly deer tick that is the carrier of Lyme Disease which is not so pretty nor precious. Great descriptive and expressive work. I do enjoy nature and the peace that it gives. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Goff Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Sara, say hi to Doris for me, please...I smiled when you mentioned Deer Ticks, my older brother Steven (an Evangelical Minister) went with me once this Spring (not this time) & got Deer Tick bit & had to have Doc fill him full of Lyme disease meds!
DiMino Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Truly beautiful; such soul! A divine write!
Goff Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Joe, lifts my spirits today!
Deo Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Intimate! Lots of close encounters with the animal siblings are resonant with your offering, James. How admirers of Nature willingly "lose" years and become nimble "boys" again. Until you stand up & feel your real age. Almost a humor of stages & ages. ThanX shalom, shalom. Caren K said it so well below. amen and amein
Goff Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 9:08 PM
True Anil! I was gassed! hill climbing, digging & sliding down in mud! the cute fawn totally surprised me, then calmed me down with blinking ears as I had a conversation but a foot away (tho I admit I was on the lookout for mama!)
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May 18, 2018 at 8:23 PM
I too have experienced a oneness with the wildness of nature, and it's difficult to express. You did it well.
Goff Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Yes Caren, nature is real, cement pavement is artificial!
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