Spontaneous Fun

For Timothy Lee
When you smile at me our hearts beat as one twosome enjoying love's glee New daylight will come delivering a yellow sun inviting us outside to romantic feels of spontaneous fun Forever stay close to me our paired play is spun under sky's blue bright spree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/23/2016 12:09:00 AM
CAYCAY, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--
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Date: 1/15/2016 11:41:00 AM
I agree with Andrea,it's short and sweet.
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:37:00 PM
I adore yours, CayCay. Short and oh so sweet!!
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:06:00 AM
Yet another wonderful win Caycay.. big congrats!!
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:50:00 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 10:31:00 PM
The most compact verse I've read so far, yet full of warmth and love. Great stuff. Well done, CayCay, Viv x
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:48:00 PM
now you are really showing your gift of poetry dear cay!..my swee congrats and huggs.. soupie soon..
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Date: 1/12/2016 10:10:00 AM
CayCay, I knew you would do well! Congrats on your placement!! *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:50:00 AM
Caycay, this is truly wonderful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:04:00 AM
Very nice Cay Cay congrats on your fine placement!
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:00:00 AM
Sweet acrostic, Cay! Best wishes! hugs
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:52:00 AM
excellent write Caycay...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:18:00 PM
Perfect for the contest CayCay!! Good luck :) *smiles* *hugs!!*
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