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Spontaneity

In a ballet of restrictive and stifling carriage, we strike into the depths of our imagination and boundless intuition on a rollercoaster soaring free from rigid clips, venturing into a cosmic sphere where dreams take flight, on Saturn's rings, exhilarating twists and turns. Firm on the grand stage, we play roughly and smoothly, each length, a part of nature's layers. Flames cannot be known by names alone, until a touch signifies its friendliness, an improvised whirl flows from each planet's curves, a feeling extended to its neighbours. We shamelessly surrender to the rhythm of the divine, navigating each realm through our inner voice, slowly bringing it to reality, where we find our worth in positive existence. Nature's wings sting through the murmurs of rustling trees. The twirl of the winds sings whispers of vibrations. Silent energy embraces the soul of the moon, giving us insights where we paint through without worrying about the result. Entangled in the sweet rhythm of unknown tones with languages that stir you into another dimension, beating to the smile of strangers, soaring high just to see low. Play tags without keeping taps. Read dialogues to friends with no lines, go unnoticed in perfection, craving attention so you live without scripts. Discarding narrow thought flow crutch We learn directly by soft touch And what we garner we relay To the vast void in childlike play Entwined this with the universe We dance without the need to rehearse.

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Date: 3/9/2024 10:45:00 AM
An excellent take on the theme... I love how your poem is a profound exploration of the human experience and our relationship to the world around us. It celebrates the transformative power of creativity and the limitless possibilities that arise when we embrace our inner voice and connect with the rhythms of nature...
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:52:00 AM
Dear tonye, what a creative write this is with clever diction and metaphors seamlessly flowing in sync to the line of enquiry too. Spontaneity i felt through your well crafted lines, and so many lines speak and touch my soul in eloquence, i agree with your thoughts conveyed and especially “ We shamelessly surrender to the rhythm of the divine, navigating each realm through our inner voice, slowly bringing it to reality,“ i agree we connect with our inner voice , as thoughts become reality. FAV
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Tonye George
Date: 3/6/2024 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, my dear Ink. Thoughts indeed become reality.
Date: 3/5/2024 5:37:00 AM
Your poetry is unique to you and your personality. It would be interesting to meet you as I imagine your conversation would be lively and uber intelligent. It shines thru in your writing. Breaking into spontaneous dance at the joy of being alive is the very essence of the theme
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Tonye George
Date: 3/5/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Yeah! We all need that dance.
Date: 3/4/2024 8:00:00 PM
Tonye, you have scripted a wonderful poem on Spontaneity. Your content is grand and your diction is lofty. "Silent energy embraces the soul of the moon, giving us insights where we paint through without worrying about the result.". Yes, we do things spontaneously driven by our internal instinct, without bothering about the result. All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
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Tonye George
Date: 3/5/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Valsa.
Date: 3/4/2024 5:10:00 PM
your poem was exquisite, filed with 'delicious' imagery. I liked so many lines, I don't know where to start. Each verse complimented your title. I especially liked "no lines, go unnoticed in perfection, craving attention so you live without scripts." Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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Tonye George
Date: 3/5/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Sara, I appreciate your lovely comments.

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