Spontaneity

In a ballet of restrictive and 
stifling carriage, we strike into 
the depths of our imagination
and boundless intuition on a 

rollercoaster soaring free from 
rigid clips, venturing into a cosmic
sphere where dreams take flight, 
on Saturn's rings, 

exhilarating twists and turns.
Firm on the grand stage, 
we play roughly and smoothly,
each length, a part of nature's layers. 

Flames cannot be known by names
alone, until a touch signifies its 
friendliness, an improvised whirl
flows from each planet's curves, 
a feeling extended to its neighbours. 

We shamelessly surrender to
the rhythm of the divine, 
navigating each realm
through our inner voice, 
slowly bringing it to reality,
where we find our worth in 
positive existence.

Nature's wings sting through the 
murmurs of rustling trees.
The twirl of the winds sings 
whispers of vibrations.
Silent energy embraces the soul 
of the moon, giving us insights 
where we paint through without
worrying about the result.

Entangled in the sweet rhythm
of unknown tones with languages
that stir you into another dimension,
beating to the smile of strangers, 
soaring high just to see low.
Play tags without keeping taps. 
Read dialogues to friends with
no lines, go unnoticed in perfection, 
craving attention so you live without scripts. 

Discarding narrow thought flow crutch
We learn directly by soft touch
And what we garner we relay
To the vast void in childlike play
Entwined this with the universe
We dance without the need to rehearse.

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Date: 6/1/2024 11:46:00 AM
Tonye, I really like how you relate this type of behavior to that of a child. There is so much we can accomplish if we allow our minds to be unchained. Thanks for this one...a favorite of mine!
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Date: 3/9/2024 10:45:00 AM
An excellent take on the theme... I love how your poem is a profound exploration of the human experience and our relationship to the world around us. It celebrates the transformative power of creativity and the limitless possibilities that arise when we embrace our inner voice and connect with the rhythms of nature...
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:52:00 AM
Dear tonye, what a creative write this is with clever diction and metaphors seamlessly flowing in sync to the line of enquiry too. Spontaneity i felt through your well crafted lines, and so many lines speak and touch my soul in eloquence, i agree with your thoughts conveyed and especially “ We shamelessly surrender to the rhythm of the divine, navigating each realm through our inner voice, slowly bringing it to reality,“ i agree we connect with our inner voice , as thoughts become reality. FAV
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Tonye George
Date: 3/6/2024 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, my dear Ink. Thoughts indeed become reality.
Date: 3/5/2024 5:37:00 AM
Your poetry is unique to you and your personality. It would be interesting to meet you as I imagine your conversation would be lively and uber intelligent. It shines thru in your writing. Breaking into spontaneous dance at the joy of being alive is the very essence of the theme
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Tonye George
Date: 3/5/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Yeah! We all need that dance.
Date: 3/4/2024 8:00:00 PM
Tonye, you have scripted a wonderful poem on Spontaneity. Your content is grand and your diction is lofty. "Silent energy embraces the soul of the moon, giving us insights where we paint through without worrying about the result.". Yes, we do things spontaneously driven by our internal instinct, without bothering about the result. All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
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Tonye George
Date: 3/5/2024 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Valsa.
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