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spoke to stars every night when world slept caught a moonbeam to confab with stars vociferously empyrean recoiled squandered dreams with hopes as dandelion scribed on sunset beside zephyr blowing twists Scent wafted breath deemed lilac & light imply luck embracing an unusual chirping of birds catalyst of magic dreams dwelling only in translucent gossips A candle burns watching prayers waiting for time flown forlorn stare long to catch sight of beloved eroded looking for fairy tale ending & sea song sitting listening wave after wave & become custodian of my solace without travel aficionado conjure a nook in my vision turning waste into fertile land to plant sow & grow roots Into You 2nd place contest winner Written: March 03, 2023 Strand Premier No 1194 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 3/6/2023 4:30:00 AM
Wow, this is indeed a beauty ! I have not enough words to praise it. The beauty of the starlit sky is enrapturing. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 3/5/2023 5:53:00 PM
Such a creative, expressive piece, Lasaad! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 3/5/2023 4:22:00 PM
Lasaad, a beautiful and creative poem, congratulations on your top placement!
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Date: 3/5/2023 2:36:00 PM
Very lovely, how the lines fall back and forth to replicate stars shooting across the sky~
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