Spoiled Plans

I purchased flowers myself, for just in case,
One last look in the mirror, checks my face.

The big clock in the hall announces six.
Only the last minute things to fix.

His gift is by his plate with big red bow.
How long it took to wrap he‘ll never know.

I survey my pretty table now, with pride.
And picture how we’ll look there side by side.

I reminded him this morning at the door.
He nodded briefly, this sweet man whom I adore.

I know he’s said it’s just another day,
But he used to bring me candy anyway.

I’ve put the baby early in her bed,
We need privacy if tender words are said.

When he calls me a romantic little fool,
I know he doesn’t mean to ridicule.

He pretends he doesn’t want a valentine,
I give one that proudly tells him, “You Are Mine”.

I try not to look again to see the time
And concentrate on writing him a rhyme.

Just then he calls to say, “I will be late.
I hope you ate your dinner, didn’t wait.

Joe emailed me to say he is in town.
He’s buying dinner, so I couldn’t turn him down.

If you’re sleeping I will wake you,” my man said.
“Can’t wait to crawl into our warm inviting bed.”

He hung up quickly, must have had another call,
We won’t be eating my nice dinner after all.

Though this evening wasn’t quite what I expected,
I know it’s foolish to be feeling so rejected.

I clear the table, put the food away.
I only hope that it is good another day.

I wouldn’t feel quite so unhappy as I do,
If it weren’t that it’s our anniversary too. 

By: Joyce Johnson


This is one example of emotion.  

It is restrained and resigned, but it is emotion.  If the dam ever breaks, watch out!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/17/2011 4:15:00 PM
Its a wonderful poem, Joyce, I have no idea if my poem is exactly what you seek in your contest, I am hoping it is, but I guarantee you, dear heart, it is full of emotion~~
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Date: 2/16/2011 4:03:00 PM
JOcye, this is how I would react too. I don't understand people that go all cuckoo over things like this. I just feel kind of sad when it happens and then I think, oh well, you always knew he was that way! I hope this does well. (oops, is this YOUR contest??) I think it is!!!
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Date: 2/10/2011 5:37:00 PM
And beautiful emotions too, dear Joyce! Bless your heart for sharing this..A story of true love and all the good blessings it brings! Goes to my Favs. List today. Thanks for sharing it. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:42:00 PM
Joyce, sometimes men don't understand the importance women place on Valentine's Day and anniversaries. I love the way you put the baby to bed early "in case tender words were said." (The passion implied is always more delightful to me than poems that go on and on about feelings of lust.) What a dear this woman was just to put away the dinner and accept her husband's behavior. Strong EMOTIONS fill this write and it's a fine example for your contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:20:00 PM
That's so sad. =[ was well written, anyway. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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